A fun story. I think you're getting your gender nouns mixed up. He, him, and his are Male. She, her, and hers are Female.

This has been a wonderful end to a great story. You made the characters come alive so it hurt that much more when Alex died. Again great story, and excited for the next adventure.

Wonderful! For a moment you had me worried if they were going to die.

I like how you are showing how the other Atlanteans might feel about the mercenaries, it provides depth to the story. Excited for the next!

This...is...AWESOME! What an awesome yet sad chapter. Especially the part about the funeral of Milo's grandfather. Hope you have a good day. :-)

Yeah they're finally free :) i couldn't even imagine being trapped inside a cave for such a long time...
Can't wait for the crew to find out that helgas still alive :)

That's boring.

That's filler.

Here it goes! The characters are going to intersect. I gotta say you got me wound up with this good writing.

So basically no forward progress 13 chapters and still in the same spot.

Good to see new chapters up. I’m excited for if/when they get out.

thank you for uploading, i really liked this chapter :)
i hope alex can help his little sister and i can't even imagine what its like to eat a belt... i feel so sorry for them
keep going;)

uhh thank you for uploading so fast:)
poor Helga and Alex... i can only imagine how uncomfortable that must be...
I love your how you portrai helga in this chapter, even though she's so ungrateful i think it really fits her character :)

Great chapter, glad to see you are back.

Thanks for the chapter i really love the backstory with rourke and you portrayed 17teen year old helga really well.
And i would love a second part Helga interacting with the rest of the crew would be great :)

That part with Stan Lee was really sweet, may he rest in peace.