Interesting...

I love your OC's a lot. Alena and Julia are interesting characters and I would love to see more focus on them. I was looking forward to seeing their lives in a more mundane way with Loki as a constant observer like your first two chapters. By following Ragnarok's plot, I feel like the MCU is driving your fic, not your OC's and Loki's Godfathership which makes this fic very unique. All in all though, your writing is good and this story has a lot of promise. Good luck!

Wow! Interesting! Great chapter. Look forward to more. Well done!

Oh my I can't wait to read more. I can't wait to see the shock look on Thor's face. Too funny. Awesome beginning.

I would like a second chapter to this.

Nice.