Reviews for Unfinished Battles (Part Two to Eternal Souls)
Tonia Rains chapter 8 . 11/24/2019
I hope you continue this story... It is a refreshing change from the same old Tuskino's... Don't get me wrong I love Sammy and kenji and Ilkio but I like this style.. your writing is a refreshing change...
NegaUniverse chapter 1 . 9/23/2018
I hope you haven’t left this story. I have been checking weekly for an update. I hope your writers block comes to an end soon!
angel313 chapter 7 . 8/8/2018
Please update again soon. This is really good.
Sesshomaru5714 chapter 8 . 4/10/2018
I just finished reading eternal souls and i must say I am loving it, i always love new takes on the sailor moon universe. I can't wait to see how this ends
Guest chapter 8 . 2/26/2018
Thank you for updating i just found this and I love it !
Ruk chapter 8 . 2/20/2018
Great chapter It was good to see Usagi surrounded by friends and interested in life again
NegaUniverse chapter 7 . 2/19/2018
I really am enjoying getting to see interactions with Ami, Usagi, Zoicite, and Jadeite. I do hope there will be more interactions between Mamoru and Usagi coming soon. Keep up the amazing story!
Amanda G. Flemett chapter 7 . 2/15/2018
I am loving this story. I can't wait to read more. I like how you have made the generals an important part of the story and NOT evil, because I've always liked how they have always teamed up with the inner senshi. The whole story (even the original) is about how strong love is and how love can and will defeat evil. Love always wins. I can't wait for the next chapter!
tavae.themisal1 chapter 1 . 2/10/2018
I binge ES and find myself impatient for more here
NegaUniverse chapter 1 . 2/10/2018
I am a hardcore fan of Sailor Moon and I am thoroughly enjoying your story telling. If people want to be close minded and not enjoy an enthralling new telling of a story they grew up loving, then they can take a hike. It’s true that Usagi is a very different version of the Usagi from the Manga and Anime but I think that is why I am enjoying her character so much. It’s refreshing to see the kind of person she would have been had she had more understanding of what had happened in the Silver Millennium and had to make the decision to sacrifice everything instead of her mother making the decision. Saturn’s involvement is intriguing, as well. I like that you have inserted a character that did not exist originally and gave him such a big role in shaping the outcome. I am really looking forward to seeing this story develop.
B chapter 7 . 12/31/2017
Love these chapters, cant wait for more!
Marie chapter 6 . 12/29/2017
Fascinating story so far. Loved all the Usa/Mamo scenes. I am really fascinated by Saturn's character.
Ruk chapter 7 . 12/29/2017
Don't write too much backstory to the generals. I think your story is perfect as it is. I'm worried that the you'll lose the whole focus. It is really good so far. The right balance of everything.

Can't wait for more. I wish that I had found your fic earlier.
Ruk chapter 1 . 12/29/2017
Just found this fic today - fabulous.

Great plot so far.

Often fics, try to include all the Usagi/Mamoru senshi/gen relationships at the cost of the whole story as it all becomes too finely spread. The main relationship is U/M and everything else is to the background as it should be.
EternalStarhaven chapter 2 . 12/27/2017
I'm not completely liking chapter two through four and need to add some things to make it flow a little better with everything else.
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