Oh, Hermione, we're going to remove you from your life without your permission, not tell you anything that you need to know, not tell your parents anything, and still expect you to be a Good Little Student and do Everything We Say. You are to give everything while we give nothing. Now, remember, you are to have none of your wants or needs met and must do everything we say because you are not a real person worthy of silly things like respect or honesty or other trivial incidentals. Go on, get with the program, remember that we own you and you have no say whatsoever in your life since we kidnapped you ""for the greater good"".

Thanks!

I neeeed the sequel! It was a really lovely, maybe i didnt like the to soon i love you, but still felt like something real.

I really want a sequel!
Kisses from Chile

Aww that was so sweet! I have a soft spot for Remus and I can't help but think they make a cute couple :') Snape was being a bit of a twat though :( I suppose it's FAV,WOO!

I had only one thing to say... SEQUEL PLEASE...: )

I really like the story, though it would be interesting to see how everyone took their being together... I dunno... I like how you ended it. If there is a sequel posted on your profile I will definitely have to take a look at it

I really like your writing, keep it up

did u create that last paragraph or did u read it somewhere cause i want to write it down as a quote but am not sure who to give credit to

I think the plot was a good idea but everything else was a bit too OOC for my tastes.

it was a beautiful story and i like the midsummer nights dream touch because at school we studied a midsummer nights dream. i thought tho that the most quoted line from a midsummer night's dream was 'The course of love never did run smooth' which would have also worked at the end. Let me say it again tho: it was a very beautiful story.

wonderful story. loved every word of it.

May I say that you should become a professional? It was one of the bests I have ever read! I loved it! Very, very well done!

as your first attempt at fanfiction i find it incredibly amazing. i enjoyed the story line and it seemed to move fluidly. thanks for sharing

I really love this story! I know some people aren't fond of HermioneRemus pairing but I love it, and this story definitely made me love it more. I like how you didn't have them falling for each other straight away and everything happening straight away, I think its kinda stupid when people do that, that really doesnt happen in life...much. Ha.

Lord, what fools these mortals be. I love that line! A Midsummer Nights Dream is my favourite Shakespear play :)

Brilliant story, extremely well written :)

VN x

Really and truly lovely. Thank you so much for this!

~celia~

this is a really good story. i liked it.