lol a naked astrid smirking at her husband hiccup and what was today's lesson hiccup saying to his wife to take a break not work so hard and don't ignore your beautiful gorgeous hot pretty sexy viking wife

Can I just say how well you did? It's amazing. Everything about it is so real and fresh and pure. Wonderful job. You can feel Adtrid, Hiccup, everything as if were real. Wonderful work, my friend! Gorgeous!

Hiccup and Astrids relationship is beautiful

*fans face* well, I can’t wait to be a married woman so I can try this!

I didn't think I'd like D/s Hiccstrid, but I thoroughly enjoyed this. Good job :)

I've loved this story.
I didn't really like the fact that Astrid was calling Hiccup "angel" though. I get it's like saying honey or sweetheart as a gesture of affection but it just doesn't feel like her.
You could have written babe instead, as she calls him in the second film. Other than that(which is mostly reguarding a personal preference of mine) the story is beautifully written, good job! Not everyone is able to write good smut but somehow you managed. Thank you :)

Hey there!
I just fall over your story, started reading and couldn‘t stop!
Plus, I read it word by word, which is unusual for me, cuz I tend to over read passages.
First: You‘ve managed something very difficult: Putting a valuable plot about love, trust and being there for each other, no matter what into a mature adult story

Second: Finally somebody who described Hiccup as the man, he is in my eyes: Strong, toned body and not the shy, lanky boy who hadn‘t got a clue! Dreamworks proofed us in the second movie that he knows who he is and that he is strong and a great leader with a huge heart though, which is the best part!

Third: I hate reading sex stories, because they are usually like: fuck, cock, moaning, groaning, OMG... So Fifty shades of dump (yeah, I think that woman shouldn‘t have become an author, but hey...)
And you really managed to describe the sex in a way which is just great to read, oh and hot like hell, with leaving loads of stuff to your readers imagination! So I‘m taking a bow and thank you for this awesomely well written story!

Curinturie

I like this story, and your comment about a certain Captain Jack Harkness- I absolutely adore the guy and I’ve written a few fics with him in and I have several more in the pipeline. I think most of mine are on affo. Who can resist a bit of Jack. X

Wow!
Just... woah! This is a great story! You've caught the dynamics perfectly I so can see this happen. How he give in bit by bit...
And the smut... rrrrrrrrraarrrrrr hot! Amazing!
Please write more!

Hiccup doesn’t call Astrid angel. What the actual fuck,. And Vikings didn’t believe In angels dumb ass

That was awesome and the last bit of the final chapter was hilarious. Quite honestly I'm open to seeing what else you might come up with this story.

That was literally the best smut I have ever read & I’m a complete pervert. Please please please more sub/dom, you write it so well!

oooooh, this was soooooo gooooood!
Please write something similar again, it was fantastic! And I want to see it the other way around too.
Might be difficult to come up with a szenario tho. But it would be soooo worth it!
And now the other one...

Nice finish up! xD Loved it.

Pretty great story, if you do decide to write more in the dom/sub category i suggest Hiccup domming Astrid since for some reason i feel like the Astrid doming Hiccup is done so much.