I love this!

By the way, will this FanFiction have ShellPWNageShipping in it?

This is a great story so far. I'm loving the plot that's being set up, as well as the changes you've made to the personalities of the different characters. This story has an amazing potential, but it just needs to be written.

I don't quite understand just how much Pokémon speak Ash understands, with things like the “biscuit” part and then the “comforting Muna” part throwing off my analysis completely, so maybe you should explain that a bit more.

All in all, I am excited to see what you have in store for this story. This has earned a place in my “followed” list, for sure.

I hope you have a wonderful day/night, keep up the good work, and always remember:

GAME ON!

I really like this story. I really hope there will be more chapters, like for example also write the ones from all the pokemon that ash has taken in after being abandoned by other trainer from all the other regions.

It's a shame that this hasn't been updated for so long. This is really good.

Next please, more, i need MORE¡

PD: Pidove for the next

I know you were just doing Oshawott, Tepig and Snivy, but I would like to see more about how the group grows together. I’ll admit, Snivy’s chapter had me crying. But I’d like to see maybe their interactions with Pikachu and Pidove and Sandile and such.

So this is interesting but I have a note.

I haven’t actually watched the BW anime, in fact I stopped watching in Diamond and Pearl days, so I get a little lost in this story because it appears that you write them in the basis that a person has seen the episode. While not a bad thing, I feel that for something like Pokémon you would be better writing on the assumption that people haven’t seen the episodes, especially with this particular season where people rage quit after Pikachu lost to a snivey

I am reading this in bed snuggled up tight with my poodle and this just made me feel really happy for some reason. Ash is so precious in this. I can’t wqit to read more!

Will u continue this? It's 1 of the best unova story ever

Omg yes yes yes! This is one of my favorite Pokémon stories! I’m so glad you’re continuing it! Ugh everything is so perfect! Seeing this update has truly made my day!

Glad to see you back

This is very well written! I can't wait to read more of your work!

Your story got my attention, interesting take on Unova, one of the more disappointing Pokémon anime series to be honest.
Will be looking forward for the next chapter and hopefully Ash will still get Sandie.
Also how many Pokémon will Ash catch anyway?
Lastly, seems there will be a lot of focus on the Unova starters and Team Plasma ma so really excited on how this story will go

Umm... I don't know anything about the BW anime, so what happened to Musharna's body? Also felt like Munna wasn't really that emotional about watching his mother get beaten to death, and Ash's group could have done more to report the actions of Team Plasma to the authorities..?

Other than that, pretty good chapter, hope to see the next one!