So cute

very good keep going

wth

Great story. The only thing I’m curious about is how they’d react if they found videos of their last selves.

“Did you make a mess, Lisa?”

DANGGG

This story was great! Kinda sad life didn’t go normally, if you think about it. I’d wonder what an older Lisa would be like in the show? Maybe they should make an episode like that. Anyways, bravo!

Hell yeh

So I LOVE how you did Lisas personality in this fanfic. It’s funny!

Hey, and If you make a Loud House-Touhou crossover story? with the girls as protagonist.

Is there a chance that you or someone else can continue this particular storyline like a sequel of sorts, please? It's very interesting.

Well, color me surprised. I didn't think you'd actually do an alternate ending.
But, despite this strange feeling of sadness in me seeing that things didn't end up the way those two had been hoping for, I still like this chapter. Just a shame that the parents didn't get any moments. Sure they'd be old, but would yield a good content, no?

this ending is better

it is a little tragic but really good i was so confused on their ages until i realized i was thinking about it to hard lol they'd all be ten elven now but question why do they wanna tell them their true ages

Well, since they don't remember their past lives very well (if at all), Lincoln will probably be spared the human pretzel bit...mostly because Lori will be all about how Booboo Bear 2.0 is REALLY who she was meant to be with, not her 'big' brother's brother-in-law...

Great story and a great alternate ending. It would seem that the incident was helpful in getting Lisa to better interact with her siblings.