needed to crythis is fine, totally

Good writing is about making the reader care. You made me care.
Simply stunning.

I loved the story! I was disappointed that they didn't really get together in the end. I am looking forward to you writing a epilogue!

I'm only half way through the story and Aang's dialogue is really bothering me. He doesn't sound like himself, let alone any 12-13 year old kid. I actually noticed that everyone's dialogue is a bit off. It really drags me out of the story.

The story's interesting, but I just couldn't continue reading. :/

I love your story! at the beginning think what? but its great! you have to continue! Please? *puppy dog eyes*
I know, my english is not perfect lmao, but i try