I like and think you’re doing a bang up job

My gosh this is amazing! I absolutely love the way you write the angst. Please update soon!

This is pretty good!

This was so good! There are not enough stories out there with Percy doubting himself and the gods honestly. Loved it!

What!? How has no one reviewed on this?
I love your angst you style of writing, definitely getting a lot of vibes from other really good stories I've read. Your synopsis was something that hooked right away as well.
I really have nothing to say in terms of how you could improve it so well done.
My only question was in your first chapter. It may only be just me but I found that the first chapter didn't quite fit with the rest of the story, though am I correct I. Saying that the whole post-Tartarus Percy character you've written forebodes there? Considering Sally decided to keep Percy instead of sending him off.