Please continue with this crossover, which is really good to read, I like RWBY and am a big half-life fan I have except Half-life: Alyx All other parts Played and self-understandable I have already played some HL mods and must say some are very well done

This is pretty cringe

I have to say, this story started great, but then it made less sense as it progressed. Why not just keep writing the actual story with Gordon helping the team, why write the side stories with Shepard and Barney, especially these with RWBY characters as ”scientists” in black mesa. The story is all over the place so I’m out.

Interesting, they started talking and ask questions. And I love that you can actually write complicated lines for Gordon since he’s a scientist.

Having to read backwards really slows down my reading. Heh.

Took me a moment to realize that they were talking backwards. That’s a cool idea.
I liked reading this chapter, I like how you write and how you portray Gordon.

Gordon speaking? Miss me with that.

Is it just me or do these have not relevance to Gordon and Shepard being in Remnant

I think Sun's been playing too much Siege.

Ross as in Freeman's mind Ross? And if so what is he in this story is he an employer of the gman or something else entirely?

Very nice, backwards writing is annoying, but tolerable.

Please don't tell me Gordon somehow got the power of the Maidens. That would be extremely dumb if it were true.

The backwards speech is getting kinda annoying to read. I prefer incomprehensible moonspeak over this.

So he lost the Gravity Gun? Well, crap. I loved that gun.

Glad to hear you're back but now wake Mr breakfast wake up and smell the ashes