awesome chapter can't wait for the next one

I’m still loving this story. Chloe being so unforgiving is a good twist. I like that new teacher as well.

I really like what you have written so far. Looking forward to seeing where this goes.

awesome chapter can't wait for the next

This is great, I love how you go deep into Max's flaws, this chapter was very introspective!

I wonder how Chloe will react to Max's honesty.

What? You were expecting her to forgive you for being afraid and insecure, Max? Not going to happen.

So quick review for your changed 3. chapter. Definitely less fluffy and a much darker ending. But i liked it more, so good job changing it. :)

Chloe pissed but its understandable. Chloe wrote letters and Max even changed her number? Hope we and Chloe get a reason why Max was so harsh. Right now Chloe has every right to be pissed.

4. chapter. Interesting to see the other characters, but still hope we see Chloe soon again. it seems like a long way, before Chloe forgives her. And i still hope they start a romance :D The line she was the closest to a sister worried me about that :)

Awesome story so far can't wait for the next chapter

Chloe's in trouble, Max. Rachel had been the only thing holding her nose above the water and, with her gone? The fall is likely to be a long one.

By God that's good! Sounds like Chloe as well, and easily a PERFECT descriptor from Max's viewpoint.

Nice reunion. I really laughed when Max was hiding behind the car :D

Liked the chapter. Well right now i am just taking the risk and hope this is a pricefield story, and not amberprice or something like that. Hope the "risk" is worth it :D

I liked it so far. :)Your writing is good.

When it comes to the photography class you lost me at the beginning a little, but just because i am not very interestet in it. I can understand why you replaced Jefferson. In every fic, even if he isnt a creep in one of them, you always feel strange with him in the story, because you cant trust him.

Right now i am looking forward to when our two favourite girls meet again. I am also curious why you expanded the Max doesnt contact Chloe, even if she is in Arcadia from 1 to three months.

Just one quick question from me. You didnt put the Max Chloe character tags in the headline so i am just going to ask. This is a Pricefield story?

I quite like this so far, keep on at it.

Well, this seems like a promising read. I like the writing style, and the story plan seems like a good read to come.

Now, since you asked about opinions on Davies... I admit I have my doubts. I won't comment on the lesson itself - I know nothing of photography, after all - but her actions seem... highly questionable to me. The "congratulation kiss" seem like a sure way to make a lot of persons uncomfortable (and from what I head of America, a sure way to get a lawsuit before long), and I'm saying this when I'm living in a country where a kiss on the cheek is basically a common way to say hello. In particular, Max seems like the kind of person to shy away from unneeded physical contact (Warren hug attempt, anyone?), so having her lament the end of that practice seem a bit strange. In general, she seems a bit too hyper, especially when you consider she's teaching young adults, not children.

Oh well, I suppose anything is better than Jefferson, at the end of the day.

Nonetheless, keep up the good work, and see you soon!