Vary impressive, vary realistic. Not how Morro talks in my opinion, but incredibly accurate all the same.

It's 2 am in the morning 2 years after you finished this, and I am in tears.

I have loved your 5 times series for a while now, but I'm quite hesitant about reading full stories by anyone, so I hadn't given this one a go. But, I decided, why not? And so here I am, typing a review in the middle of the night trying desperately to muffle my sobs.

Amazing. Just. Plain. Amazing. None of it felt out of character, it had some of the least grammar (and I didn't even notice any spelling) mistakes out of anything I have ever read online, and it was just all around awesome.

I was particularly impressed with the triple meaning and Jay's guilt, both were so well done! (also, it may just be me, but thinking about Morro and Gem all I can picture is Umehito and Kirimi Nekozawa from Ouran HSHC, and now I can't stop laughing). Back on topic, I usually feel like stories of this kind waste too much time at the beginning and rush the adventure, leading to an unsatisfying conclusion that is mostly the reason I stopped reading them. But, I'm so glad to say, that this was not the case here!

Another thing I noticed was that you finished this in 4 MONTHS?! Speaking as a fellow author (though not usually on here, unfortunately), that is incredible, even with a planned plotline.

Overall, just magnificent, and I hope you continue writing in the future, because it truly is beautiful.

~RW

Pls makke a sequel

UWAA the revealing of triple meaning of the fic title was brilliant, really
I enjoyed the fic so much, so many times did I shed a tear. Well written emotions, fantastic plot, everyone mostly in character. What you did with Morro was absolutely amazing, outstanding, adorable, I was so glad! And Gem was a great character as well.
It's just been so nice to read everyone's happy endings, it melted my heart ️ I am so happy I read it, really. I am applauding and sending a million thanks for that work you've done. Truly outstanding fanfic, truly.

Oh my god. I just have to stop for a minute and say that this is the most gripping, exciting and breath stealing fanfic I've read in a while. I am just devouring chapters so far and can't seem to stop! I am in love with this, you are amazing, author, thank you so much! Can't wait to see what will happen to them, I am just hoping for the best. But, let's find out!

This was a gorgeous story. Truly beautiful and inspiring. It was also literally a roller coaster of emotions. in both good and bad ways. You displayed all the characters in equal way and although Cole and Jay were the main focus of the story, you focused on every one else and their individual problems equally and it was well distributed. A truly enjoyable read. You also got their humour very well and I love how you've portrayed Morro's redemption. It wasn't overbearing or crazily out of characterit's exactly what I'd expect from the canon Morro.
The goodbye between Morro and Lloyd was amusing and I like how you showed in that brief moment that despite everything that happened, Lloyd wasn't suddenly over his trauma and okay with everything.
You touched many matters and resolved them peacefully and fully and I admire your ability to do so. It was an amazing read and I look forward to the sequels I've seen on your profile (although I have no idea what they're about yet, I'm very excited).
If you're still looking for five suggestions... Maybe 5 times Cole was, I don't know how to describe it, but like, the calm rock who held the team together and the one time they held him together?
Five times Kai lost control and one time he didn't. Preferably with his element, since his power is more destructive than everyone's else and as a result, causes the most damage even when he doesn't mean to.

Morro?

What's wrong with Jay?! I love your story, is the best fanfic about Ninjago I ever read!

This is so funny!

What can I say except...wow.

This took me on an emotional rollercoaster, from Cole’s petrifying fall right up to Morro and Gem starting off with the Lost Souls. (And what a name; it’s always amazing to have the title pay off not once (in Cole) but also TWICE in those two. Bravo!) And Corrine, and her problems - what a beautiful way to tug at heartstrings. And you redeemed Morro in a way that I’ve never seen before - it felt true and genuine, and I WANTED him to be redeemed throughout the story. When he decides to stay with Gem, and it felt real and earned - ugh. Such a satisfying story. I’m gonna go read the next bit right away!

Fantastic work.

Rina

I LOVED THIS STORY SOOOOOOOO MUCH! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING IT AND BEING AN AMAZING WRITER! :DDD

I KNEW IT I KNEW IT I KNEW HE WOULD OFFER XD

TOURNAMENT OF ELEMENTS CONTINUED! JAY VS COLE! XD I think Cole WOULD win but hes not himself so he'll probably remember or something

I HAVE STAYED UP TILL 2 AM READING THIS BUT IT ALWAYS ENDS IN A CLIFF HANGER SO I CAN'T STOP! ARGH :( XDXDXD

I LOVE THE TWIST WHERE SHE IS LIKE SIX YEARS OLD EXCUSE ME HOW SHORT THESE REVIEWS R I AM JUST SOOOOOOOOOOO EAGER TO READ THE REST!