This story deserves more recognition. It is very well written

Man, I really can't wait for the next chapter :D

When will you publish the new chapter? The story is super interesting!

I was super excited by this story at first but it’s essentially porn and not much else. It’s just not my cup of tea. Good luck.

You’re a trash writer who starts the story with NONE of the main characters

This is a good story, I look forward to more.

keep it up i luv the fic

Boring its your typical prince being married to noble lady.
Jon snow its like a kid having gun to his hand..
Boring boring voring fuck shit.
What about ghost what was that.
Kill yourself dude hahahah

Enjoyable story, admitedly hard to get in to, but when you're in you're in.

Awesome characters both Visenia and Myrcela feel alive and realistic. I like that Jon is not some Valyrian Jesus, but flawed human, with feelings and wants. Most stories about Jon as Valyrian tend to go Jesus route for no reason and stop whitout any explanation.

Admitedly your start of the story is a bit too long. Episode at Volantis is hard to read, because I at least wasn't yet invested in characters. Now yeah it's cool, but I think you tiped your hand too soon or something.

You started this story with a lot of hurts for Jon and now we start to see how those wounds affected him not only in bad ways. I think happy days were too little at the start. Thou I love the story.

Jon is naive like the original series people who dont learn from experience.
Annoying story and deanerys is a bitch in heat quite offending.
Well asian culture hehehe

I’m really liking this so far! Jon seems like a very powerful and quick witted young man. Hopefully, those wits will help him from being manipulated in the Game of Thrones.

The story held quite a lot of promise when it started.
But then you started adding Valyrian reincarnation flashbacks, then Dothraki (which was tolerable), but then the Volantis episode and Ghost and the dragon being under the control of shadow binders and all the rest now.
I am quite sure that you will burn out all the ideas before you ever see the end.
I have seen this happen to a lot of good authors who bite off more than they can chew
In the end, the stories get abandoned, the potential wasted and the readers frustrated.
I hope that doesn't happen here, so good luck with that.
I just can't read a story where there are plots within plots and too much mystery or drama.
I like straight forward stories, so I guess the fault is mine for not checking thoroughly before starting reading.
Anyway, I'm rambling. Good luck and have fun.

Regards
Sarah

I really like the plot you're creating here, I don't know why but I really like the relationship between Visenya and Jon and how the way they used to see each other is changing. I'm really looking forward to know more about them. I hope even if they are in King's Landing their interactions just keep growing. Also I really like that Jon and Dany are seeing other people not only wait for the other.
Please, up date soon I really love your story and how you portrait all the characters.

this makes no sense- the prince who started a war for love not allwing his own son to marry for love.

great chapter, looking forward to the next one!