Love the story so far... Only one problem: they don't flow together. The first book was written as if you were describing the anime, but this one is like you cut and paste the game dialogue. These are two completely different styles of writing and since this is a continuation of book one, I would suggest keeping a similar enough writing style to keep the story flowing smoothly, or a gradual transition so as to not just jump from one to the other. It tends to throw off your audience and make them less interested due to the flow being disrupted in that way. I hate to be the bad guy and put it to you like this, but I don't know how else to phrase it. I hope you don't take this the wrong way as I see potential in this story and it's plot. So you certainly have a good idea and I look forward to your decision moving forward.

Don't care about those bitches just cont u story

I'm probably too late for this the reason people says because they can't write too well and everyone gets ideas from someone else people's works inspire people I hope you haven't stopped writing

What'sthe fic you were looking for called, the one WhiteDoll gave you the name for?

YOU MUST CONTINUE WITH YOUR STORY. IGNORE THE BAD COMMENTS.
JUST DO IT

Alright, I dunno WHO the fudge would say you suck as an author. I thoroughly enjoyed this story, and honestly can't find many- Or any at all- stories similar to this one. Maybe I'm just looking in the wrong places, but still. I can't find many fanfics like this one.

The point is, your a good- Dare I say, wonderful- Author. And this is coming from someone who reads 800 page long books daily.

I luv this story, don't give up! Haters gonna hate

Keep up the great work if you like writing stories don't let anyone stop you no matter what they say

Please don’t stop writing your one of my fav writers sad it’s those trolls or angry douches who put others down who are to blame

Honestly, most stories are simply conversions of concepts life or other stories. In one way or another, whatever you write has likely been done before. True originality is hard in this age...

That does NOT make a story bad. In fact, there is such a thing called 'challenge' stories, where people basically write the same story. Some of these are well worth reading, even with if they have the same plot.

From my point of view, you write very well. Generic, or not, your stories are good. A bit lacking in detail while a little too quick in pace - which could be said to be my opinion - but nothing I can find that is actually wrong.

My advice is to ignore and/or delete guest reviews(except for those you find helpful). Especially flames. If a person isn't willing to write a review under their own name, so they could actually argue a point if needed, then it isn't worth your time to bother worrying over what they wrote.

You don't suck I like reading your stories

I'm sorry you let assholes like that person ruin your fun for the wounderful art you put out with each chapter

We will miss u! I really did like your stories and was hoping to see u finish them. good luck in whatever u decide to do next and if u decide to come back, please let us know. U will be welcomed back with open arms️

Your writing is great so why quit over a few rude comments? It's a real shame to not be able to see how these stories end.

And to continue my other review, why does it matter what they think? It's your story, you're why it's good! Original content or not, it's got a different feel to it.