Thank you for this story. For some reason i knew some of the story. But I don't remember the chapters after Christain got hit by Elliot. I loved this story. Loved how you showed that Christain and Ana are stronger together than apart. Thank you.

I think that Elena is behind this and she brainwashed Elliot to do her dirty work. I hope they keep an eye on this blonde.

Good chapter. Ana walking in on Christain in his bedroom i would have probably stood there watching too. I wish they would sit down and talk everything out. At least they would know which way to go friends , friend's with benefits, or a couple in love with each other. Thank you.

Good chapter. Sounds very interesting. Thank you

Oh. Si era Elliot. Tristemente. No quería que fuera él. Es uno de mis personajes favoritos al igual que Ray. Pero esta es otra historia en que los padres de Ana son eliminados.

Me fascina Ed Sheeran!

Elliot es otra víctima de CG o está enamorado de C? No son hermanos de sangre. O Elena lo enfermó tanto o más que ha C.

I really liked your story, so sorry about Elliot he is one of my favorite characters, I guess you did not like him much.

Loved

I just finished reading this story. I found it when I finished another of your stories. I couldn't put it down. I didn't like the idea of Elliot the way you wrote him at first, but then it is your story so I got over it. I mean with a person like bitch troll lerking it could have happened. i will be reading all your stories because that is what I do when I find an author I like. thank you for sharing your talent!

Oh my goodness I absolutely loved the whole story from start to finish you an amazing writer and author. Girl you have some imagination keep it coming in your next story you write
Loved this so happy they have these kids and wow twins on the way. So sweet yes my teeth are begging for some sour candy as I said you are amazing
Thank you for an excellent story looking forward to reading more

So sweet

So happy Christian is going to be ok and he was out of the coma and they got to see thebsex of the baby and him hearing it for the first time my husband was like that with all 3 of our girls having the heartbeat was so special
Now he's just got to get better and propose to his lady

Thank God Christian is ok damn how could he doubt Ana being pregnant with someone else's baby I wanted to smack him . I can't say I understand why he thought that even though she wasn't really big and she told and so did the nurses and dr that she didn't leave him. But leave it to Grey to think crazy thoughts as always.
Yeah I knew it was Elena and Elliot and true they would have got Ana some how.
I bet Christian was beating himself up not able to tell Ana but I'm glad she got the reason for not being told, dang so Elliot was brainwashed and mind wrapped by that bitch good riddance to both the lowlifes

I understand in a way why Christian kept this from Ana but in a way I don't. He is still letting that bitch manipulate him in matter what. Hell he went up on the roof with Taylor and bvb told him what was going on . I know he wants to keep Ana safe by not telling her but he did wrong. He thinks he's going to be able to just meet with the manipulator and just talk as she says. Oh my stars Christian where is your brain?
Oh my goodness Ana is pregnant coolbeans hope all is good with her and bvb the little one since Christian pushed her out of the way. Oh God he was hit by the speeding car and landed on his head. I do believe Elliot has lost his fucking mind
Oh God please let Christian be alright because you said no death or memory loss
I hope someone took care of the bitch preferably killed her and her hired guy or submissive
I know Christian has hurt Ana by lying to her about this but she loves him she won't leave him
Wow can't wait to read more