| Reviews for The Escape |
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   leonebrion chapter 8 . 3/30 My heart! He finally broke the cycle! Great ending! |
| leonebrion chapter 7 . 3/30 Bittersweet chapter! |
| leonebrion chapter 6 . 3/30 Mr. Aishi is such a sweet dad! My heart is swelling! |
| leonebrion chapter 5 . 3/30 This is turning out beautifully so far |
| leonebrion chapter 4 . 3/30 Yes, Mr. Aishi! Fight for you and your little girl's life! |
| leonebrion chapter 3 . 3/30 Ryoba is definitely worse than Ayano. Disgusting. |
| leonebrion chapter 2 . 3/30 I mean, at least Ayano seems to love Senpai. Ryoba is way too aggressive with him. Ayano seems way more sympathetic, especially since she could be a pacifist. |
| leonebrion chapter 1 . 3/30 Ryoba is so much worse than Ayano! |
| Alice Forshadow chapter 4 . 2/23/2019 GOOD FOR YOU! You go dude! :) |
| Surfwriter chapter 9 . 11/4/2018 Hey again, just read this story now and it's a good base for the sequel, good grammar and nice story flow. Just found a mistake though. In chapter 8 it mentions that Soto sold his house for a car and other stuff when in the sequel the house is still under investigation and therefore cannot be sold as you've mentioned there. I know it's kind of nitpicking but just wanted to let you know. I like your works and hope you keep it up |
| Guest chapter 9 . 7/29/2018 10/10 |
| Guest chapter 8 . 7/10/2018 Yes I would love to see a sequel |
| BreatherOfInsanity chapter 8 . 7/10/2018 This story was amazing. Whether you make another, or go out to become a published author, know that you're amazing and you'll have my support. Thank you for putting your time into this, you beautiful person! :) |
| Rangerprince1 chapter 8 . 7/9/2018 This is so heartwarming. Thank you for making this, it’s really gives Ayano a more positive personality than what she is today. |
| kitty tokyo uzumaki chapter 8 . 7/9/2018 This has been the best Yandere Simulation fanfiction I have ever read. I wish there were more fanfics of Ayano with her father. I love the idea of you continuing this! |
