Yes...
Armsmaster was acting like a total asshole last chapter.
Mhm..
It wasn't like it was legit part of his job.

I really couldn't see anything indicating he's being an asshole, more like you resisting arrest.

Vigilantism is still a crime, after all.

Me agrada que no hayan extendido el conflicto innecesariamente.

Los interludios son una buena forma de darle sabor al mundo.

Esos dos son como un grupo de comedia clásico.

Nunca están fácil.

Es normal que en las historias largas haya información contradictoria.

El hechizo de inmovilización es uno que necesita.

Hasta ahora sus opciones de ataque son letal o super letal.

El poder de hielo es más práctico que poderoso.

Me pregunto si ella hubiera podido cortar la pistola.

Menos mal que él no actúa como en la serie o sería muy incómodo.

That Armsmaster scene was... not good. It felt less like two characters talking to eachother and more like a caricature of Armsmaster spouting lines as quickly as you could manage to get the inevitable Taylor vs PRT scene out of the way.

the entire timeline is messed up.. Between the trigger and the bank there's 4 months of time, which you have completely ignored.

Loved this version of the story better

This entire chapter feels like one big omake.
If you'd just kept going with the mood that was set from all prior chapters, the story would've been great.
Instead of rewriting the entire story, start the rewrite on this chapter, because it was really solid up to this point.