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Here I thought I was the only person to see that fictional documentary. really enjoy you story. can't wait to see what other changes you make.

Learn to spell, dumbass.

Very good story. I would have liked it to be longer. I hope you’ll write the sequel one day, Focusing on the war against the white walkers. Who his Sansa’s partner/husband and father of her twins ?

Thanks for sharing. Hope that life is tearing you well.

Great chapter... great story as well.

You’ve been quite inventive as to the various styles of execution for each of the Lannister. Well done. I like this very self assured a d kind of ruthless Jon.

Yawn! You’re a dumb fuck that doesn’t know shit! You must eat shit since your writing is shit! Shit eater! Nothing but an embarrassment to your family!

Yes you named him Jaehaerys, I like the name so much more for Jon than him just being another Aegon. It's like really that's the name you give him. It's just the worst name for him. First there was what 8 or more Aegons, and have of them that become King where terrible. Second his older brother was already named Aegon like you already dance on his half siblings when their mothers marriage was annulled so no need to also spit on it by taking the name. Finally both Jaehaerys where pretty good kings so giving Jon that name would be good luck.

This is bad. You need to learn basic grammar, for one. Also, Tywin started the war by killing Jon's family at the Twins, even though they were already at war? What?

I guess the other person after jon death is little finger or vary's or cersei/ joff
all of them cause of pityness jealously anger spite and for not seeing the grandest secrert of all time hidden in plain sight

what did you mean to say when oberyn is thinking bout elia for it says . for his dumping of elia had started a war that say elia's death and the death of her kids. what did you want to put there? or did you leave something out like. and says that elia's death and the death of her kids was all for nothing all cause of a lie

This was wonderful. thank you for helping me come out of the disaster that was season 8. Waiting for your sequel.

my brother you have crafted a great story

You’re dialogue is trash, and your writing more flawed than the teeth of an Orc from Mordor.

good job! I love this story

YES!