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Iwu chapter 6 . 7/9 I have never ever stopped reading a fic to give a review, ever. This is the first time in my fucking life and I've read more than thousands. Chapter five was so overwhelming I just wanted to tell you I couldn't read it straight. I had to make pauses, fking pauses m8. The misunderstanding made me blush and inner panic and I thought I had already passed the inner panic phase. Congratulations man, you're badass |
Onlyafraidoffear chapter 13 . 2/19 This was adorable, a really great job on this story! |
Else1991 chapter 12 . 5/1/2019 Kawaï I LIKE. |
icecatfire chapter 13 . 4/1/2019 Cute, funny, heartstopping, and interesting. :3 |
Abubu Keyho chapter 13 . 11/13/2018 (。•o•。)っ.゚。・ |
Narako chapter 5 . 9/25/2018 Lol, I died at the end of chapter 5. |
LilianaRosana chapter 13 . 7/29/2018 It was incredible ! The storyline was just perfect ! Really interesting, with a plot twist of Marco getting captured ! Ace's feelings were explored slowly, letting him the time he needed to realise how deeply he cared about Marco and Marco being so lovely and gentle about it all ! And the epilogue was pure gold, I really laughed reading it ! I really loved it, even if you sometimes mixe up the tenses. Thank you for writting this ! :D |
Ecarlates chapter 13 . 5/11/2018 I love your story ! Marco and Ace are so sweet ! I came here to heard a lovely story between Ace and Marco, but I find myself liking almost as much the crew blabbering ! Really, the whitebeard pirates were just so fun ! And so sweet and they take care of Ace, like the time when Jozu said he will not comment on Ace depressif thought cause he didn’t said them on purpose but they will nonetheless speak about this later cause he is sad that Ace can thought of that ! Really, you managed to mix romance, humour, sorrow and fear so well in this beautiful story ! Well done ! I love it ! |
AndurilofTolkien chapter 13 . 5/5/2018 love |
AndurilofTolkien chapter 12 . 5/5/2018 sweet :) |
AndurilofTolkien chapter 11 . 5/5/2018 nice ;) |
AndurilofTolkien chapter 10 . 5/5/2018 like this |
AndurilofTolkien chapter 9 . 5/5/2018 like |
Everlastingdreamshop chapter 13 . 4/4/2018 OH wow this was a journey. I loved absolutely everything about this from the title to the dialogue. I really liked how you wrote this, the POV were so well done. For example there was no unnecessary change of POV. I also Just loved how you characterized Marco and Ace. Ace’s fear and frustration about the truth- truth fruit was just so well written. Like I felt his fear. Ace’s recklessness the past 3 chapters had me a edge of my chair. You really scared me when you asked in you authors note if you should make sad sad. Like I would’ve continued reading it but oh man would it have hurt my heart. I’m so happy that they both ended up happy. Oh man and the drama about Marco in love with Ace was so well done. I felt terrible for Marco because homeboy needed to let Ace know. But I also understood why he was hesitant. Like the timing and not wanting to ruin their friendship. Their relationship developed so well. Like you didn’t force it and it didn’t come out of nowhere. I’m so happy that Ace fell for Marco and realized he was in love with Marco. Also Marco’s backstory was great and I loved that he used his old language as a code. Even though his village was trash, I love that Whitebeard found him and saved him. The epilogue was hilarious, thanks for giving us that. Really thank you for taking the time to write this and choosing to share your lovely work with us. |
Vorazlov28 chapter 13 . 4/1/2018 Ah! This story was so amazing! I loved every bit of it. I can't wait to read what you write next :) |