Reviews for RWBY Homecoming
Silver Slayer 2077 chapter 10 . 5/21
is the story dead?
ranjira1988 chapter 10 . 12/30/2019
* Nelson muntz hath been summoned * "HAaa~HAA Cardin got owned by Peter Parker !

I sincerely hope you continue this story its really entertaining it'd be a shame to see it left unfinished ...
ranjira1988 chapter 2 . 12/30/2019
hmm young Spidey & Ruby? heh its a good match up honestly I wonder why its so rare in RWBY Marvel Crossovers ... Peter & Ruby are both Nerdy both share very similar beliefs and both have experienced loss that motivated them to become what they do

also on your AN: I dunno some versions of May would be all "Nonsense what kind of person would I be to leave four young girls to sleep In the streets?"
Anon Ghost chapter 1 . 10/17/2019
I think you missed up this story like team RWBY are huntress in training they have so much to learn and stuff like that. Thanos is powerful he have the Infinity gauntlet and the 6 stones are powerful in the universe and also I think you should like RWBY exploreing the Internet like reaction on YouTube videos or peter showing the place and explaining history and science and stuff like that and I think you should do Team RWBY have strong friendship with Peter you know he is a good kid I think he need know about them and help them like know how they feel. If you want to rewrite the story and deleted the stuff or someone will adopted this story make it better. And I also what if team RWBY didn't turn into dust but peter turn into dust and how will they react to that. And also have a nice day
Erembour chapter 1 . 8/5/2019
This story had so much potential to be good but you completely fucked it up with the timeskips, lame plot, and lack of meaningful character interactions. I understand you made this story before infinity war came out but you could have just centered it around civil war or homecoming, hell a major team up with the rest of New York's vigilantes (Daredevil, Luke Cage, ect) would have been good too. What I am trying to say is that you had plenty of material to work with and you have experience in making stories but you still blew it anyway.
IROCK108 chapter 10 . 2/19/2019
noice.
Guest chapter 2 . 1/6/2019
Just saying, as someone who works it, rwby computing and communication tech ranges from modern to 50 years less advanced. The only example of modern computing I can see are scrolls and an 8 bit gaming console.
TheBestNotNameEver chapter 10 . 11/28/2018
Update! Unless yout dead, then its okay. Just make sure you tell us if you are!
northwind132 chapter 10 . 9/13/2018
Love this story. Hope you update it soon.
Javimagine236 chapter 10 . 8/14/2018
Continue!
TheFishKing chapter 10 . 7/29/2018
Thor needs to adopt Nora or at least train her
starseedchild chapter 10 . 6/19/2018
Nice story keep it up, also you should bring in one of the great Spiderman villains like Venom
Last Step chapter 5 . 5/17/2018
Say, this is just a suggesstion, but (regarding the Infinity War Movie) Do you think you can write a chapter showing team RWBY's reactions with everyone (Especially Peter) dying and turning to ash? just kinda curious. Thanks.
Theupdatemesage chapter 10 . 5/13/2018
Pleeease. Contineu. Its such a great story so pleease. Contineu
Enclave ranger chapter 5 . 5/7/2018
oh you poor sweet summer child... Infinity War would've hit team RWBY like a freight train on steroids and meth.
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