more chapters please

I must have more.

Re: chap. 3, Jiraya's fight fate

Don't you mean eunich instead of woman, although woman is funny?

What happen to hinata at least keep her in it show that she increased her confidence sine he was gone so she can be with him say when she found out he was taken she got depressed then decided to get stonger so she can help get him back instead of standing on the side lines hope you change your mind.

Ok, let's talk about this.

This isn't Naruto at all, this is an OC that you have the arrongance to name and base him off of. Five chapters in and somehow you get more undeserved views, reviews, and attention than this that actually make their story well written.

I think this is all that needs to be said in a story where Naruto us nothing more than a character shoved in due to wish fulfillment. If you were actually creative, just using an OC was good enough. You put him into a world because: "FANFICTION, WISH FULFILLMENT, YAYYYYY!"

Imagine what other crossovers can be made with the same method that doesn't involve Naruto. This is getting old.

Can't wait for the next chapter

Are you going to update this

please update

Wait so they know dbz but they don't know naruto

Hope there is more

siguele

Do you not understand the term of youkai, it means monster or spirit who can be affiliated with a god such as the karasu with amaterasu as well as the wolf, plus Artemis would be against him for being part monster

First I would like to say that I really like this story and thank you for not giving it up can't wait to see what happens next. Second has anyone gotten permission to do a reading of the story would really love to see how the Percy Jackson universe and the Naruto Universe characters react to this. Thanks and have a good day or night

Sorry to say this but I rather the story with Hinata in it and if you removed her then yea I'm out

Hinata needs to dip. She can't be paired with Naruto