That was awesome! I'm excited to read more. What will happen now and what did the maegi's words mean?

I was wondering if you will be following the main events in Jorah's life, this is a really nice and creative way to send them to Essos, specially because it keeps Ned's and Jorah's friendship and Jorah's honor. I wonder what's waiting for them over there.

This is a very interesting take on the story, pretty entertaining read so far. Obviously your version of Lynesse is very different from the book/show version, much more likeable, I'm intrigued to see how things turn out between her and Jorah. Jorah too seems different from the Jorah I'm used to see. Still can't decide if all that silky suaveness suits him or not, but I can see why Lynesse fell for him... Same for Ned, it's so strange to see him this lighthearted and easy-going, though maybe he was different in his youth. I absolutely loved his and Cat's interactions with everyone, though. And I just love how you breathed life into the characters that either barely got a mention in the books/show (Dacey) or didn't even exist there, or at least I don't remember them (Jory, Dorian), couldn't get enough of their banter.

Can't wait for more chapters!

Your Lynesse behaves a lot like Lyanna Stark. I would have loved to see Jorah/Lyanna, their characters seem more alike.

love to see more
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