I like how long this chapter is. All your others were very short, but this one was good. And btw I like Discord, it’s also the name of a chat site I go on.

Good chapter. And I’m bad at guessing. Like bad. But it’s sort of a good thing because I’m surprised a lot by the outcomes of a book or fanfic. Makes it more exciting.

As I’ve been reading I noticed these chapters are very short. I’d suggest making them longer. I actually struggle with trying to make good sized chapters myself. I’ll also suggest being more descriptive. Like tell me the weather or explain what’s around the room, you know little things like that to liven up the scene. I do like the plot though, it seems to be progressing smoothly so far.

That's gonna be hard for Luna. I can imagine this. I think something gonna happen during the guards will come to move Celestia's body.
Anyways this chapter made me sad. And keep up the good work Redwallover28

Some backstory and tension building in this chapter. Good. I was thinking in chapter 1 this non-aging thing was going to come up and perhaps couse a big problem. Perhaps Starswirl and being an element has something to do with it. Maybe Starswirl’s hiding something.

Sorry I took so long, I haven’t been on FanFiction much lately but that should change in the weeks to come.

As for my review for this chapter I’ll say that you set up the intro to characters and plot well. I know who’s involved and got a small hint of what mite happen in this story, but I shall see :)
I will say though, from what little I heard of it, I love how you wrote Applejack’s accent.
I spotted two problems. One is that I’m confused on where the ponies are at. Are they in a house? Outside? The other thing is small. When a character says something you connect the action statement to the dialogue with a comma.
That’s all.

Curiousty is increasing rapidly. Cadence was replaced by Chrysalis for real. That doesn't sound good. Now Celestia's gone, Twilight's Princess of Sun and Sunset is Princess of friendship I don't think Equestria will be same again.
Oh well done Redwallover28

I'm surprised so much. Sunset! New Princess of friendship! It's going to be so much interesting. I'm gonna keep reading to find out.

Loved this chapter. So now sunset has decided to leave mirror world and stay in Equestria for the rest of her life. Wonder what else is going to happen.
And what about Chrysalis. Is she planning to attack Equestria again.
Anyways keep up the goog work

Excelent job on this chapter.
Poor Spike he must be so sad when he heard this. I'm feeling that now.
Oh well, have to see what's gonna happen next. Keep up the good work. Redwallover

As far as I could guess it looks like Cadance had been replaced once again by Queen. Or there is something more dark to come. Anyways great chapter. Looking forward to more.

Very
cool!

Oooh! How interesting! All these questions without answers ! Are they all destined to bealicorns?! -cc

I couldn't have done without the mate thing because only twilight and rarity ever really showed any interest they're all independent women , an " IF a possible mate wouldn't age and cause them sorrow" would have been better off , but this is a very well written intreging chapter! 100/100 :)

Oh poor Princess Celestia too bad she is not married imagine how hard this would be on her husband and consort