I just wanted to say again that the story was truly awesome. I was upset to see that I an one more person reviewed. again I wish you could write more. thanks again for a wonderful story.

Adding to my favorites

I read it all. Very good. Please write a sequel. AWESOME

Good story, I like how you've used original mythology to spice up your story. Very clever. Keep writing, you have great potential.

Isabel Night

P.S.-A little bird told me that this is your first posted Ronin Warrior story. I want to welcome you to the fandom. I know you'll make a name for yourself here. _

I'm sure here: off the the kitchen. You met: off to the kitchen.

taloned is not a word.

where it says: then flew away in the general: it should be: AND then flew away.

Do not worry for your city, should be Do not worry for your city;

Well thats all, sorry if any of this sounded rude.