This filled in some great blankets! Really since to see some of the behind the scenes stuff we missed. Great job!

I love how you told this story from max’s Point of view. It’s so good!

I love it! Thanks for sharing!

Awww, this was great, I love Max and her POV and I loved the whole group sleepover

I love Dustin staying close to Steve's side at the beginning - keeping him upright against the wall.

"Eleven wakes up, tagging along beside Mike with one hand holding onto his sleeve" - aww

I love the chain reaction of everyone waking everyone else.

"Dustin, who's near tears now, looks like he's going to physically fight Nancy when she tries to argue that she should be the third person in the car." - Aww

The Max, Eleven and Mike scene was nice.

"Max drives them one time and suddenly she can't even approach the car without Steve eyeing her suspiciously." - hee

The ending scene with Eleven and Max officially becoming friends is adorable.

Please update xxxxxxxxx

I loved this one. It is really heart warming, in all the good parts and more. I love the group dynamics, which feel more like the old group, before season 2 and that disconnected plot. Keep writing and thanks for sharing!

EXCUSE MY LANGUAGE BUT THIS WAS FUCKING ADORABLE

Aw this is so sweet and warm and beautiful! I hope you continue this story!

dustin ready ro fight nancy for a seat in hoppers car is the best.

A lot of people think Max needed to play a more essential part, and perhaps she will. I like that she's refreshingly normal-not everyone is so quirky.

Ahh. I love how this one-shot is all interconnected with the end of s2 and yet is a self-contained story. Great job!

I loved reading Max's POV. You have her character down well.