I like to imagine that they listened to really atmospheric, emotional music in the car.

Yas, Leah! Vandalize that car!

I love how Bella is suffering here. I feel like this story is gonna mess me up though.

I can’t believe I didn’t start this sooner. I’m so fucking excited.

Dont know if it would appear. But is an emoticon of hands clapping.

These two are just awful.
More than once I wish SM gave Edward another love interest. Or so many other things.

Read she was doing Midnight Sun again, thats something I'll keep away from. After BD I was done reading her.

Ok, I wrote to the sequel of this story before reading this haha my bad! And I told you to upload it to ao3 bc I could log into my fanfiction account but I didn't try on my cellphone and now I did and it works here!
First of all I lived your story, it was really well written and it made me feel ask of their emotions, besides I felt that your plot was amazing, I gave always hated imprinting because, yes they are mandatory, aa if you don't have a choice and that sucks... And what?! Imprinting on a baby? The daughter of your ex love ? Nah, to much for me. And Leah, her characterization was incredible, I felt her. I hope to keep reading your stories! Sorry if my English is not the best.

Wonderful. A great story, beginning to end. Great characters written well with care and commitment. Jacob as Alpha and Leah as Second in a Pack of two, excellent. Thanks for writing for Leah and bringing her to life as a whole person. I hope you continue to write, in whatever interests you. You are talented.

My god Jacob is impressive. He is holding himself together in the face of a mortal enemy and that vamp’s huge disrespect, in the face of the pleading of a vamp he loved when she was human. He is keeping his wolf submissive to himself, the man. While Leah cheers him on and he can feel it. She was excellent in just what he needed to get this done.

Wow! We see the drive of the wolf to be with Reneesmee and the struggle of the man to have a choice. This was very good. With the Cullens watching and protecting and Edward reading his mind front row seat to the struggle. Maybe Edward is sympathetic but his daughter and wife and family will always come first. As Jacob realizes, Edward isn’t sorry enough.

So much has happened to Jacob in such a short time. I would take the car, a friend and run too.

Poor Charlie. Bella never gave him a thought and now they don’t know what to do. Jacob seems a little stronger. I’m glad they are reaching out to their family.

He can’t leave but if he doesn’t then he has to find a way to live with what’s happened to him. Leah is motivational in telling it like it is and understanding what’s happened to Jacob. She makes it more bearable, even if she doesn’t see that. He sees it.

A Talk, not a Tirade. How can he sort it out? He is fighting himself, his wolf, his connection to the universe. He has Leah and his self respect and maybe they are far enough away. Reading on...this is excellent.

Leah has seen worse things - Sam with Emily - than her Alpha breaking down for his newborn imprint. Brilliant writing, telling us so much about her thoughts and feelings in one excellent sentence.

Leaving a huge tip for a server in a small town is generosity and humanity that the Cullens would never understand. A server living on tips just making it, that’s more Pack lifestyle than vamp.

Amazing story, thank you