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then you hang us here without part two ... TTATT aw...

Ahem ahem.
Jugem-Jugem Poop Throwing Machine Shin-chan’s Day Before Yesterday Underwear Shinpachi’s Life Balmunk Fezarion Isaac Schneider One Thirds Pure Feeling Two Thirds Worried-Over-A-Hangnail Feeling Though Betrayal Knows My Name Or Does It? I Know The Unknown The Cuttlefish Tastes Kind Of Different Than It Did Last Time Because It Was Caught Near The Pond And Served With Oil From A Hoofed Mammal, Pepepepepepepepepepepe Runny Diarrhea.

It's pretty cute. Some fluff every now and then really cleans my soul :)

I think this a sweet fluffy idea for a fic and I enjoyed it for what it was since Alisa x protagonist fics aren't really thing these days. On the reviewer side, there was a bit of issue with the consistency of your tenses and punctuation could have improved a bit. But your spelling was on point which something I find a lot of writers neglect.
All in all, it was nice little read but my recommendation is you apply the line break feature or clearly announce when perspectives are going to switch because that can throw a number of users off, I would highlight but this site hates reviewers lol.
Don't be discouraged this was a lovely fic that I enjoyed but as a writer, you don't ever want users to get confused at any point on whose perspective their reading cuz that can very well make or break your stories quality.