Interesting stuff so far, although I think the flashback/forwards are too much of a good thing. Regardless, this is an decent read, and I do hope it gains your interest again at some point.

I really like your writing style, it’s very exciting and everything seem to be happening all at once. I really enjoyed it, I’m sad that you don’t have the steam to keep going but I am glad you wrote this!

This part of the story was truly engaging. I hope that your muse tugs at you and allows your creative juices to overflow and you can continue to work on this. It is good, and I truly want to know where you will take it.

All the scenes jumping around is confusing and annoying.

Please don't ever write flash forwards again. The story is good, but the format is painful to read. Thanks!

I really hope that you can finish this!

What's up with Cedric being a jerk, hoarding info (Dragon task), cho cheating on him?

Powerful Geas...but current tournament! 3 each?

Wow, that dragon fight insane and I just can't go to sleep now without reading 2 chapters

That sounds like a nice tournament, which makes the sabotage all the more unfortunate.

Thanks for another good chapter. I wonder if Hermione or Remus will figure it out first.

Great chapter! I'm looking forward to seeing how the second task resolves, and who Harry chooses to take with him. Will the Yule Ball be held at Beauxbatons? And how's the Harry-Cho-Cedric love triangle going to resolve this time? UPDATE SOON! P. S. Love the bit with Sirius's "useful" charms.

Wow, seems like you're still going strong! As usual, lots of nefarious things going on here - can't wait for the next installment to see how everything plays out!

Love it!

Bet Moody set up Cho after Harry, and told Cedric to make him jealous