love the story... i noticed you used a bit from "The Newest Challenger" by Kenchi618. Understandable, big fan of his work too.

This is an amazing story I sincerely cant wait for the next chapter, and I cant wait to see if feelings develop more or if it's just a mentor student relationship.

I honestly love this story, One thing im confused on, why isn't Cus using ultra instinct, has she turned it off to give naruto more of a fighting chance? and is Cus going to teach Naruto how to use Ultra instinct, because if she does teach him ultra instinct he might not even have to use the God of Destruction Mode to reach those god levels.
I need more Cus/Naruto moments! too cute!

In a world where anyone can explode galaxies with a ki ball, goku would not need to know many techniques, most of all to perfect his speed and strength as a melee.

Continue, this is very good.

Loved it more soon please

First, love the new chapter and hope you update more often. Second, completely agree with Jiraiya getting a beating, as I quite dislike how a Ninjutsu specialist like him didn't even start Naruto on Elemental Transformation. No one was asking for a god-like Naruto when Shippuden started, but we expected him to actually have a few ninjutsu under his belt, not just the same jutsu he used previously. Hell, even Jiraiya training Naruto in countering Genjutsu was utterly useless since both Itachi and Sasuke manage to get him rather easily; Itachi with a simple finger which Naruto needed outside help from both Sakura and Chijo to escape, and Sasuke easily getting into his mindscape to prevent Kurama from giving chakra to him which also makes Naruto's training as a Jinchuuriki pointless since his main source of power can get countered rather easily by Uchiha Sharingan and Kisame's Samehada.

On another note, I hate and utterly loath Naruto's Jinchuuriki transformation after he got the initial yellow Kyuubi Chakra Mode. I really wished Kishimoto had focused Naruto's training as a Shinobi and not a Jinchuuriki. Initial Shippuden Sasuke and young pre-sharingan Kakashi prove how powerful shinobi can get in base form if they put the effort. As for transformations, they should have been kept as ace-in the holes and multipliers for their base forms, much like how Hashirama used Sage Mode to multiply his already immense base power and bloodline to god-like lengths during his final battle with Madara (I am basing this last fact on the case that we never ever see Hashirama use Sage Mode against Madara in his other battles, only using his Mokuton Wood Human to counter Madara's Perfect Susanoo)

Oh you and your kungfu panda and in hilarious

zatchbell Vortex wiki

( wiki/Category:Vortex)

as a ninja he can use many variations of kienzan like krilim and being a wind user I think of avatar Aang and 2 star sheron who could use wind ki.
and maybe it can solidify the wind in invisible arms or legs or also as pressurized balls like kuma or Yura (Alive: The Final Evolution) o air kunais as Luc (Darker than Black)

wiki/Air_Solidification#Live_Television.2FMovies
wiki/Pressure_Manipulation#Manga.2FAnime

will there be more please tell me there is more

Is no one gonna mention that Kung Fu Panda references? What a fucking author

Wait why does he have blood? He’s made out of chakra