Ok im getting ur abig fan of fma but lets be real ed is in over his head he can fight and a lot of people in fma can fight but his and their skills and abilities are no where close to anybody like erza or natsu in fairy tail mabye lucy and and the weaker wizards but erza should be able to trash ed with our much muss or fuss. Plus dont turn ur stroy into a mary sue yea it good he has magic but dont try to bs it and make him op than everybody its a sad cliche move that make to literal or literture sense . Just seems more like a fan service .and fanboy behavior.

Sweet that u continue the story like i said before end and most writers i see dont get that alchemy and magic share the same concept of energy and to achive something theyre has to be a price. Wizards use their own spiritual energy by combining it with the natrual energy around them or simply by absorbing ethernano and using it like a philosopher stone to by pass eqivalent exchange. Ninjas from naruto use chakra to do the same. Magic users from dc and marvel do the same with the use of energies from other dimensions hence the breal more laws and can achive more.

I like this chapter and I think that this story seems Interesting.

Loved it

Your stories are awesome people are just lazy

Yay! Ed's finally back home now with Al and Winry. And I'm glad Zeref and Mavis are living with them now too, because Zeref especially deserves to be happy after what he's been through with his curse.

I'm glad Lisanna was finally able to return home. Lol! And that was funny how she called Ed a midget, and he ended up tripping over a pile of boxes in his failed attempt to attack her for it after she had already disappeared.
And I'm glad Ed has his memories back. And judging from what Zeref had said After returning from the Gate afterwards, I'm guessing he gave up his alchemy in order to return Ed's memory (and Al's too, I hope) the same way Ed gave up his own alchemy in order to bring Al back.

Wow Natsu, you're an idiot for suggesting that Ed could use a philosopher's stone as payment for memories. Then again, Natsu's usually always an idiot most of the time with any idea he might come up with without thinking about said idea first. I hope Ed is able to find something as payment to use to get his memories back.

Wow, so Zeref actually made a philosopher's stone to use to try to get Ed and Al's memories back. But at least he realized the value of those lives he sacrificed in order make it and became unable to bring himself to use it afterwards. And I hope Lisanna will be able to successfully complete her training with Zeref so she can finally return home.

I'm glad Ed was able to contact Al and Winry with the communication lacrima that Zeref helped him buy so they don't have to continue worrying about him or start to think he's dead or anything.

Yay! Now Ed's starting to get the hang of magic. I hope he can be able to learn Entrapment Magic so he can free himself from Lisanna's spell and be able to leave.

Sweet! Ed's gonna learn magic again. I hope he is able to get rid of Lisanna's spell on him after learning how dangerous that type of magic is.

Oh dear, that didn't seem to go very well for Ed with Lisanna finding out about him seeing Zeref. Then again Natsu did have it figured out as Ed was trying to leave, never underestimate the nose of a dragon slayer. I like how Ed was explaining to them about the philosopher's stone though to keep them from going after it.

I agree, people who don't give feedback are just missing out on a great fanfic, and your fanfics are amazing (er, well at least the one's I've read anyway, but you know what I mean).

Well, so it looks like Zeref and Mavis have revealed themselves to Ed and plan to help him get his memories back.

Poor Ed, he misses Al and Winry. I hope he decides to stop being stubborn for once and just help Lisanna so he can finally return home to them.