Reviews for The Shinobi who Speaks in Hands
Tryson chapter 1 . 11/19/2019
OP as hell I love it
Shade chapter 1 . 6/3/2019
Story is totally dead...Working on RWBY work author is...
taro nightash chapter 2 . 1/16/2019
The idea caught my interest, and now I want more. This is an amazing fic! The writing style keeps me going and your ability to merge it seamlessly makes it even better
monsterkillers124 chapter 1 . 10/12/2018
are you going to be continuing the story or is it done already
Kitari Ferreira chapter 1 . 5/18/2018
continue this its really good!
TheNinetailedKing chapter 1 . 1/13/2018
you should really write more
SinObscura chapter 1 . 12/9/2017
Ida fun concept and I look forward to seeing where you take it my only issue is the grammer while not much of a problem could use a bit of cleaning up. My questions though are this, what would be the pairing? would Gaster be a permanent entity within Naruto or will he eventually fade? will other characters from undertale make an appearance? I look forward to more updates and seeing where you take this story.
Epic wubbs chapter 1 . 12/6/2017
Nice story so far but it could use more chapters maybe 40 or 60 also will any of the undertale cast be introduced.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/16/2017
This is a great page you should start writing again because I just love this
Remzal Von Enili chapter 1 . 11/15/2017
I wonder what color naruto’s Soul is? Or does it still even register as a human soul with the influence of Gaster and Kyuubi?
oneoddtodd chapter 1 . 11/13/2017
It has potential...
Guest chapter 1 . 11/11/2017
Nice and I would like Naruto to be smart like Sans if you don't mind it would make the story more interesting
sonic chapter 1 . 11/8/2017
I liked the chapter!1
bladetri chapter 1 . 11/9/2017
like XD
Junior VB chapter 1 . 11/8/2017
No está mal.
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Not bad.
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