damn it i was hoping this would keep going

I’m hooked to the story but it looks like you don’t update to often. Oh well. Do continue this story it’s pretty good. I want to see the councils reaction to the Spartans

ONI certainly knew how to create monsters, I'll give them that.

I like it, but the character development for the OC's is FAR too fast for me to process. They are literally stacked on top of eachother. The time flow is too fooking fast aswell. And i thought Kurt was the only one with Ancient Human weapons? I'm so confused. If you could rewrite the first few chapters; that would be marvelous. Also, the punctuation could use some work. Couple of run-on sentences here and there.

W0tttttttt. I really dislike some things about the story straight off the bat.
First if all, Kurt wouldn't say anything classified even if he got a good feeling from someone. That's like saying, "Hey, did you know that Earth is in x Coordinates?" to an elite that he just met (before they became allies).
Second, why would you go straight off the bat into alternate universes? Besides the fact that the chances of them existing are nearly 0%, his dog tags wouldn't say "United Earth Government", they would say "UNSC".

All things considered, pretty damn good

Great story

You need to proof read this better, there are tons of spelling and punctuation errors.

I like the fanfiction

Hackett as cole with the halo Everest. Looks like the Reapers are in some real trouble now.

That was mighty fast af.

Interesting story can't wait for the next chapter