Reviews for Games
othfangirl chapter 2 . 1/18/2018
Yay for a sequel, this was the perfect epilogue! What a nice treat! Nathan being all hot and bothered over Haley at the office and not being able to stand it and concentrate a second longer was totally sexy! Love how he dragged her down to the "stacks" to spend some time alone with her making out, hehe, and he was getting even more turned on with Haley's sexy law lingo, lol! Loved their flirty banter with each other, they were adorable together!

And I'm so happy that Haley finally got to meet Elise and Nathan insisted on it this time. Glad that Haley went with Nathan to pick her up from school and Elise loved Haley right away! Loved the three of them going to get ice-cream on the riverwalk together, and mint chocolate chip at that, hehe, and the little girl just wanted to be like Haley and was so excited that Haley complimented her art work! Her and Haley were adorable together, and Nathan was so damn proud that his girlfriend and his daughter got along so well! And yay for Nathan winning the custody battle and officially gaining sole custody of Elise! Now they can put that worry to bed and get on with the rest of their lives! Love that Elise already wanted Haley to move in with her and her daddy, hehe, it was the cutest thing ever! And Naley saying I Love You's for the first time was fantastic as well! What a perfect way to end things! This was super cute and the perfect little sequel to the story! Thanks so much for sharing it with us :)
missmelsie chapter 2 . 1/18/2018
I am so, so happy that you've written more of this story! I love this Naley and Nathan as a lawyer working with Haley is all kinds of hotness. Slamming her up against the shelves? Urgh, I love them. I don't even care that this chapter wasn't as smutty as the first because Naley's interaction with Elise was adorable, and also you make the simplest actions sound so damn hot just by how descriptive you are.

You know how desperately I want you to keep adding to this story. It's pure gold!
thibbs65 chapter 2 . 1/15/2018
Wow. Awesome update, I love that Elise was so friendly and liked Haley right away, glad Nathan got custody of his daughter. Please write more Naley.
Kaylaramirez16 chapter 2 . 1/15/2018
AMAZING WORK LIKE ALWAYS!
UPDATE SOON!
naley12 chapter 2 . 1/15/2018
Another great chapter. It was great to see them all interact as a little family together
OTH123 chapter 1 . 11/10/2017
Great story! I think a sequel to this would be great like how does Haley get along with Nathan's girl and maybe Nathan and Haley have one together!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/7/2017
Cute story! Could there be a second chapter?
Guest chapter 1 . 11/7/2017
Amazing
Guest chapter 1 . 11/6/2017
Wow I loved this so much. I loved how their relationship progressed. I think it would be awesome if you did another chapter so we could see Haley meet his daughter or their relationship in the future. Also the smut in this was very well written so great job it was super sexy. Thanks again!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/6/2017
Omg this is incredible! Love your writing
othfangirl chapter 1 . 11/7/2017
Hot damn girl-what an amazing story! I love it dearly! Dare I ask if you were inspired by Luke Bryan's song-Games? hehe This was an incredible one-shot, and I absolutely adored all the different dynamics at play here! First off, Naley being partners at a law firm together was outstanding, and I love how you set up their backstory with them secretly flirting with each other for a while, so that when Haley was basically love sick over Nathan, hehe, and wanting so badly to hear from him, it really played out so naturally that she was crushed over not receiving a text from him over the weekend!

And Nathan being a single dad trying to raise his little girl all by himself, was adorable! Yuck for Alex Dupre being the mother, lol, but thank goodness you made her a psychotic crack addict who wasn't in the picture and Nathan was in the middle of a custody battle to hopefully be granted full custody! Love the way you paint him as such a doting father though, that's always so swoon worthy to read! I never would expect anything else, but it's always endearing for Haley to see for herself! Love when he confessed to Haley that he had been taking care of his sick daughter over the weekend and that's why he didn't get the chance to talk or text with her! Way to go Nathan! And the little girl all cuddled up next to her daddy was adorable!

And confident and charismatic Nathan is one of the very best versions of him, hands down! Loved the way he made the first move and finally asked Haley out on a date and sort of confessed his feelings towards her. He's been watching her closely over the past year and knows that she's been through the ringer but wants more than anything to be the guy to make her completely forget about her ass of an ex, and give him a chance to make all her dreams come true! Love how Nathan just went for it and put his heart on the line! And in true Haley fashion, she initially got scared and ran away, but she finally was forced to deal with the fact that her feelings weren't so one-sided after all and that Nathan truly liked her back!

Haley and Brooke's talk was great, and as always, Brooke usually can read Haley like a book and knows just what to say to alleviate her fears! Glad the she gave Haley the nudge she needed and that she found her courage to go to Nathan and be honest with him. Loved Haley waiting in Nathan's office for him to return as it gave her a chance to glance around the room and take in all of the adorable pictures of him and his daughter! So sweet! And Nathan was so caught off guard when he returned to find Haley James waiting for him, hehe, he was speechless! Loved their conversation and Nathan was so relieved to discover that he wasn't going crazy or imagining things, that Haley in fact felt the same way as him, so awesome! I think I cheered out loud at her confession, lol!

Their date sounded perfect! Glad they got to try out the new Italian bistro after all, and then Nathan took her back to his beach house for some much longed for alone time! Their cuddle session on the couch was adorable, and Haley being the impatient one and just needing to be with Nathan right then, was hot as hell! And damn girl-don't know what you were worried about, their love making was sexy as hell! All kinds of passionate, with smoldering chemistry oozing off the page! Haley trying her best to take charge and Nathan wanting to slow things down to make it last, was pretty spectacular! You would never guess this was your first go at the wonderful world of Naley smut! I say you certainly passed with flying colors and then some, hehe! I totally expect to see more from you in the future! Naley were totally awesome here! You portrayed all their emotions so wonderfully and captured all the pent up desires that come with longing for each other for so damn long, brilliantly! So kudos indeed!

And on my goodness-the end had me swooning even more, with Haley waking up in Nathan's arms just a few hours later, and being uncertain over what all this meant for them and what the future might hold. Her nerves and fears were starting to get the best of her until Nathan immediately stopped her from getting up and told her to stay with him, for tonight and every other night they are together, that he's not going anywhere. The whole no more games thing and of course their iconic always and forever line at the end, was outstanding! Totally rounded out another epic fic from you! Another brilliant and amazing story that I have already added to my favorites list! Thanks so much for sharing your latest masterpiece with all of us :)
eahenry20 chapter 1 . 11/6/2017
I love this so much! Can we have another chapter?
thibbs65 chapter 1 . 11/6/2017
Loved it, wish Haley could of met his daughter, I really hope you write more smut, your incredible
southernbangel chapter 1 . 11/6/2017
What a great story! Whether a one-shot or part of a chaptered story (I am totally down with reading anything you write!), I loved it. Sexy, confident Nathan is to die for, and your Haley was spot-on. Thank you so much for sharing this story, I would absolutely LOVE if you continued this story but even if just a one-shot, it's pretty damn amazing.
Kaylaramirez16 chapter 1 . 11/6/2017
absolutely AMAZING WORK!
CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT YOU HAVE IN MIND FOR NEXT CHAPTER OF THE STORY!
UPDATE SOON;)!
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