Reviews for the end is where we start from
Natalie Rushman chapter 1 . 9/2
LOVE it X] So sweet and honest. You did a really great job with this one.
wenduo chapter 1 . 12/17/2017
Aww never get boring of this type of fic, lets hope they have some moment together in deleted scene?
SketchyScribbler chapter 1 . 12/8/2017
This was wonderful! You brilliantly captured Loki's thoughts and character in this scene, and what it meant to catch the stopper in that instant. And it was really well-written!

Thank you for letting them hug.
foolondahill17 chapter 1 . 11/24/2017
This scene has been done so many times (no complaints at all) but yours is certainly the most convincing I've yet read. Loki's characterization is spot-on. Well done!
emeraldarrows chapter 1 . 11/12/2017
Lovely!
katiebug0410 chapter 1 . 11/10/2017
amazing
MirrorFlower and DarkWind chapter 1 . 11/8/2017
Damn i love all of lokis thoights just great i loved it and let them hug
sami1010220 chapter 1 . 11/7/2017
Great job! I had the same issues with the movie, glad I'm not the only one
Mademoiselle.Cla chapter 1 . 11/7/2017
Great story! I want more *.* Please, go on writing!
AnaBookWorm chapter 1 . 11/7/2017
Loved the story!
Ale123456 chapter 1 . 11/6/2017
I loved this story. Thanks very much for giving them their hug haha

And I agree with you on some of the tone and characterization choices. I did love the movie, but I wish they had done more/other things with some of the characters. But I did love the movie. Can't be too greedy I guess haha

Anyway, thanks for writing this fic. I just finished watching the movie and this is exactly the story I was hoping to find before going to bed. Thanks!
Ruby Casablanca chapter 1 . 11/6/2017
I really love this internal dialogue. Though it's only a few seconds long between the toss and the catch, I feel like you did a phenomenal job going through the whole spectrum of Loki's emotions. While I did love the movie and found it entertaining, I did find myself wishing that the sentimental moments held more weight, as they do in this story. Great job!
peacockgirl chapter 1 . 11/6/2017
Love this!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/6/2017
YES. I would love it if you continued this to those talks, but I understand if you end it here. But I LOVE THIS.
LRRH17 chapter 1 . 11/6/2017
I felt the exact same way about the movie - and, clearly, I am also fixing this for myself with fic! Particularly this one! :D I absolutely loved this. Wish we'd gotten to see it happen!
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