I like it ;)

Elijah you have found happiness with Elizabeth, just be careful your family can be a heavy burden. Especially Esther, because this changes her plans. Because now Elizabeth is your priority, if some danger were near you would only escape. I wish that Elijah could have children with Elizabeth, he could never be completely happy for your family and he always wanted to have his own family.

Looking good so far, I would love to read more. What year was that chapter in.

Omo! this is really good! I loved this~

Very good