I would love for your story to continue, maybe some homicide cases that help them work out their relationship. I like the way you write jane and maura.

Maybe a future epilogue.. like 6 months or a year down the track. not too far that they have a whole new life together, but just ahead a little it where they are confident this is the real deal bu still going through some hurdles. Love it though, so much warmth and love. Just beautiful. I've read this a few times now, can see myself coming back to it again. Thanks heaps for sharing

another chapter would be choc sprinkles on a gorgeous cupcake but it is great as it is, thanks;-)

Damn...I just want to stay lost in your stories! Normally I will read a few short stories and be done reading for months or even a year sometimes but the way you write has had me glued to my computer for almost 4 days now! It just amazes me that someone can write in a way that absorbs me so completely! Thanks again for the stories! I think you're fantastic!

Definitely could’ve had a fourth chapter or more, but it also and did very well. They’re together and they know they’re going to be OK. You have other amazing long stories that show is how well they do together

Brilliant read shame u never wrote a few more chapters your a great writer

Sigh. So sweet...

The story is perfect as it is. Beautul and alive and so good! ;)

03.05 am and I can't stop reading... I love it!

cool and sweet. :D

lovely! would love to see one more chapter!

You excel at writing between the dialogue.
Also love seeing you put all that running experience to use! ;D

Absolutely lived this story. Ending is good. If you ever do write another chapter that would be great. Either way, thanks for this. Look forward to reading your next story if you write again.

Loved this chapter. This is a great story. Look forward to reading the next chapter

Wow, just now had the time to start this nee story of yours. Fantastic opening chapter. Look forward to reading the next chapter.