I think you should write more of this!

interesting fic , i hope to see more of this in the future

Is your mindset better now? Just curious, but some of the other reviewers seem to want to see it continue. Don’t let them down.

I would actually love to see more of this plz

você está indo muito rápido o sexo está bem mais trabalhe em construção de personagens.

I think the lemons and affections were unrealistically rushed. Spread them out more and build the relationships.

Hey dont stop doing what you love because some people cant read the storys summary before reading dont let them control how you make your storys out last time i checked this was your idea not theirs dont let people stop you make what you want and be happy tbh i like how the dramas been laid out and wanna find out what happens next with Team PRWN and BJRY

I originally came here FOR explicit smut, I'm sad to see that some people go out of their way to disregard warnings. Don't mistake my initial interest for being uncaring to the plot, I love when there's a healthy mix resulting in plot-based sexy times. I loved reading this story and I hope this isn't the end.

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this is a good story. i hope it continues

Sorry about your story. It was one of my favorite fanfics.

I really wonder who doesn't read the description on a rated M fanfiction, but this was an awesome story and I hope this doesn't effect you to hard.

First, I'd like to say sorry about that, I personally disagree with the quantity of smut but the flames and at that even personal PMs about it are, if anything like the comments, completely hostile, hateful and uncalled for. I liked your story in the beginning and i think you did it really well, the concept was good and you proved that your execution was in no way lacking. I completely disagree with the hostile and hateful behavior of a lot of the recent comments, but what i believe might've disparaged some towards the story, even myself, is that it had a very nice plot, it was being done very well, and the smut was always fine in my opinion, but it's just that it took over too much time instead of the plot. I personally read it sometimes or just brushed passed it quickly, mainly coming for the story line.
Again, the problem is that from a balance of both smut and plot, it got a bit too tipped on one side, as there was even one chapter that was more than 90% smut with the ones prior and post it being mostly such too. Aside from that, some parts of the smut became a bit more fluent with fetishes, I can see how that can appeal to a more profound range of people, but it also might be off putting for some.
Pardon for this somewhat too long review, I thought and still think the story as good and am grateful for what you've given us, I just believe it would be better to balance between the smut and plot a bit more rather than leaning on one too much. Either way this is a story with potential and a lot of us hope to see it continue. That's your choice in the end of course, once again thank you and i wish you all the best.

this isn't a bad story just focus on the plot more

Fucking flamers ruin half of all fan fiction writers.