I liked how Merlin's friends were ready to defend their friend. Loved how Gwaine stumps Arthur but makes his stance clear. Don't know if you're still writing, but wouldn't mind seeing more from you. Might try for a longer piece next time.

This was short and sweet. I also quite liked how you portrayed gwaine i think it's very in character for him.

this is very well-written, especially after the moment of danger is past, and arthur and merlin have a chance to discuss the issues of the reveal. i like that merlin got a little angry, set arthur back on his heels metaphorically - but that they didn't stay there, they worked honestly through the faults and failings on both sides, to be honest with what they wanted to keep in the relationship...
one of the hardest things to get right for this fandom, imo, is the banter - and yours is pretty smooth, so well done on that!

That was really fun! I especially liked your characterization of Gwaine. Great job!

I really liked this story. I loved the part lancelot played in it. ii loved that we as a fandom have pretty much universally agreed that gwaine either suspected merlin had magic, or even if he didn't, he'd have no problem accepting it. so of course, I like how you wrote gwaine here. loved the possesion plot point, the gaius moments were sweet and so in character. and most of all, the merlin/artyur conversation was really well done, especially merlin's angry reactions. all in all, a great story

Beautiful! I loved this!

That was a nice little story and an elegant way to do the big reveal :-)

Great story, I loved it so much and wish it would have happened on the show like this! Honestly I'd love to see a continuation of this story, maybe one with Merlin talking about his magic and showing it to Arthur and then how they plan to change the laws.

Great story but I think it would be cool to do a chapter where some of those questions are answered. Maybe even one in the future where Arthur announces Merlin as his Court Mage after allowing magic back. P

I really like it. This is true friendship/bromance. Brothers from another twist.
Keep the good work
;-)

Loved the story.
Thank you very much.

How is he doing? Do they know why they were possessed? As Arthur have some memories of his time against Merlin he must know that Merlin is also in danger. Poor Merlin. Still out cold and I hope he doesn't have nightmares. He knows everyone have knowledge of his once secret, what will happen? Is the Great Dragon going to give them any advice or help him? or...i am saying jiberish now.
I just want to read the next chapter soon. It's a really intersting story.

carry it on don't end it at 4 chapters because it's really good and I hope that this amazing story can continue

Loved it! Can’t wait to see what will Arthur do and how will he react when Merlin wakes up... hmm for a moment there I would imagine that Merlin would try to run away... to hide hah after all his whole life he feared being found out so it can’t so easy for him to just accept that his friends found out... or I can imagine Merlin asking or begging him just to not burn him on a pyre... that he will accept everything else. Anyway can’t wait for next chapter! Update soon!

Love this so much! So glad Arthur is finally seeing Merlin for his true nature and his goodness, I hope he realizes that Merlin and magic are not evil! It may not be as black and white to him as it is to Gwaine (which I love btw!) but still, he better not banish Merlin or something foolish after all Merlin has done!