I see Tododeku here ... to me that is.
This is still quite entertaining!

That was absolutely adorable!
I'd like to see more of stuff like this, especially for Tododeku.
And you might want to bump up the rating to K, because of that tender moment near the end.

Ohhhh my god, okay, I love the way you write these two. That was adorable and hot and I like that you’re able to show so much without actually making anything get blatantly dirty. The only beef I have is that I get taken out of the story a lot when suddenly in the middle you’ll just switch character POVs without warning; it gets unclear at first who is thinking or talking, and I have to go back, which is distracting. And kind of a pity when the rest of the writing is so brilliant! There is some excellent figurative language in there and gahhhh, you write them so cutely! Thanks for the read!

This is so flipping adorable. I love it.

I love this so much!