we need thwm to have more instances like this! great story sofar

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very good fanfic really enjoying reading it after the series ended.

A slow motion potion! :D I love it! This chapter felt so fun and creative. The dialogue between Akko and Diana still feels so natural and fluid. I'm very impressed by how you capture their personalities. Awesome to see that you've built upon the momentum of the first chapter so well. Keep up the good work!

Super adorable! I liked your look into a Diana still discovering her feelings. It all felt very natural, and very genuine to her character. And hey, Akko can give a mean massage. Who knew? If I were to make one suggestion as to help with the structure of the story, it would be to start a new line/paragraph each time a character starts a new line of dailogue. It helps make a piece of writing easier to read, and lessens the chance of someone becoming confused over who’s saying what. Still, really great work overall!

Oh my... This work is so good! That kind of work, when both girls do not know they have crush, but they act so intimate and close with each other, is really cute and heartwarming. I especially love that you did not make them out of character too. If you decide to write next chapter, I would be more than happy to read it, but this work is magnificent even as it is right now. Thank you for your hard work!

Wow no reviews yet? So I get to be the first (inb4 I get ninja'd)? Easy follow favorite. This was a ton of fun to read. I often find myself thinking that people on this site tend to go a little overboard on the fluff and flirting with Diana and Akko and they start seem like completely different characters. Not that there's necessarily anything wrong with that, but sometimes I find myself wanting to read a bit more of a believable romance between the two. In this case however, Diana and Akko really felt in character even while doing some flirtatious things. Keeping it lighthearted and dialed down really seems to suit these two more. It makes for a really cute and entertaining story.

I would definitely be interested in seeing a continuation to this. Especially if you keep up the excellent tone and characterization that you have going here. But I also definitely understand how life can get in the way of writing as a hobby. Don't force yourself to continue; you can and should be proud of this as a stand alone work, but I'll be ready to read it if you ever find the time to make a sequel.