Excellent plot, I like what you ate doing with the Caleb character in this. Poor Bonnie, Judy is going to let her have it for sure, for almost getting then fired. I look forward to learning more about Jack and Caleb's pasts.

I know this was posted nearly three years ago and you probably moved on to bigger and better things, but I hope you can find it in your self to continue with this story.
This is the third of your pieces I’ve read and you truly have a knack for story writing.
Hope to see and read more of your amazing work

I'm loving this story! Please, keep going!

Shut the hell up, Cookiegirl0812. Stop using my real name.

great story keep up the good work

Terrible.

-Kaitlyn Parsons

Awesome storie lovin it so far

Great chapter fox, keep it up! Nick and Judy are lucky that Bogo didn't fire them and let them off without reprimand even after hearing what happened to them and Bonnie. There's a reason that officers aren't allowed to do ride-alongs and what happened is proof of that. I'm sure Bogo will use the info they gave to the ZPD's advantage when dealing with The Pack. Nick and Judy need to worry about getting ahold of Jack though and it looks like he's about to strike again. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Great chapter fox, keep it up! It seems that Caleb wants Jack out of the way just as much as by Bogo does. The only thing that they differ on is how they go about it. The thing that has me concerned is what Caleb said before he left. Does he know where the Hopps farm is and if he does what is he planning? The fact he doesn't care about the ZPD and what they're doing regarding his gang don't bode well for anyone. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Great chapter fox, keep it up! Dang so the leader of The Pack is Stu's old friend that robbed his family before they split up and Nick, Judy and Bonnie are now trapped in their HQ. Can't believe that after all this time that Caleb would be leading this drug gang. Question now is how are the three gonna get outta there and then tell Bogo they know who is leading The Pack. Based on Caleb's mammals that ain't gonna be easy to say the least. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Great chapter fox, keep it up! If it wasn't enough that Nick and Judy got assigned to the vigilante case now cause of the explosion not long ago they had to deal with Bonnie makin a big deal. Let's hope that Nick and Judy don't get in too much trouble with Bogo about having Bonnie ride with them. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Great chapter fox, keep it up! I can't blame Bogo for taking Nick and Judy off the Pack case to be honest. One its gettin way outta control even for them and two the ZPD needs to get ahold of this vigilante Jack Savage and Judy being a similar species to him would help her and Nick get into his head and eventually catch him. I just wonder if takin down Jack will be the more dangerous of the two cases considering his weapon arsenal not to mention his drive to single handedly destroy The Pack. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Great chapter fox, keep it up! Well after what happened with Frank and his slimy lawyer, I now know who the vigilante is question is what did The Pack do to Jack Savage for him to go off on them like he has? Can't wait for the next chapter!

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You're back! And with an amazing chapter too! Looks like Bonnie's gotten them into a heap of trouble and hopefully she learned her lesson about treading on their jobs. An intense meeting with Bogo and very fun to read. Great chapter!