Reviews for Firebreather: Evolution
Guest chapter 3 . 10/29/2019
This was an enjoyable read thus far. Duncan's observational joke on Dr. McCoy resembling Cookie Monster had me laughing myself silly. I hope to see more, there aren't that many Firebreather stories up.
razer14 chapter 3 . 6/18/2019
please update your story
Zak saturday 1 chapter 3 . 12/28/2018
Please update soon
DRAGONDAVE45 chapter 3 . 11/29/2018
Cool! Please come back and continue this!

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Goodfan48 chapter 2 . 11/23/2018
great story! can't wait to read more.
soundwavecon202 chapter 3 . 7/5/2018
Please continue, i fell in love with the story the moment i read it.
Please continue, Oh Mighty one.
chris kidder chapter 3 . 4/12/2018
keep up the great work i hope chapter 4 will come out soon.
RichardRow chapter 3 . 1/8/2018
Please more! I like what you are doing with the interactions Betweem Duncan and the rest of the X-MEN. My only complaints are we don't have enough X-MEN (Jean Grey, Nightcrawler and Spike only ones used the most are Rogue, Cyclops and Shadowcat) heck we don't get enough of Professor X or Logan whoch would be perfect to talk about Duncan a kid who isn't fully human yet not a mutant (X-MEN strandard for one and being half kaiju). The other small thing is these events are very simiular to the Frebreather movie. Which to be honest I think reenacting one scene would be fine but if you do more than one I could predit the story and just add X-MEN into it. I know you could probably do a lot with this great idea than just copy events of the movie while adding X-MEN into it.
Guest chapter 2 . 12/16/2017
Sorry, I guess your stories ok, but really?
U couldn't spice up Rogues lines instead of using Kenny's lines?
Ziva Mal Sakura Phantom Berg chapter 3 . 12/7/2017
Nicely done, I love it so far, please make the next chapter soon.
DarkJoey chapter 3 . 11/16/2017
Can't wait for the next chapter
Guest chapter 2 . 11/8/2017
Nice chapter! I really like this story so far, it's quite an interesting crossover. Especially since there aren't that many Firebreather fanfics around. Though maybe consider making longer chapters? Either way, keep it up!
Crossgomer chapter 1 . 11/2/2017
I'm glad to see a firebreather fanfiction. It is one of my favorite movies. I enjoyed this chapter and I hope to see more.
DarkJoey chapter 1 . 11/2/2017
Dude I love firebreathing I disappointed it didn't get a show very interesting story please continue