Yeah this is dead

Y’know I didn’t want to say it but this is dead

Please update this it’s been a year and you haven’t even said you abandoned it

I have to admit, this series you've made was pretty emotional. You've definitely done a good job with using the horror aspect with this story. Probably one of my favorite concepts would be how this story was written to show how this event made Ruby effect her teammates and everyone else around her. If you're planning on doing this from Qrow's perspective(I haven't checked to see if you have published a story with that), I would be very excited to read that story completely. I'm very proud with all of this progress for this story that you've made.

This is actually a good story. I enjoy the plot line and the way it’s going. Keep up the good work.

I honestly feel bad for the huntress.

Da fuq? I don’t understand what it says!? Great chapter.

I was feeling goosebumps during this chapter. I love how you portrayed the huntress and ruby during this match. Can't wait to see the chainsaw rev again and to be followed by the gibberish voice of 'ol Jedidiah "Bubba" Sawyer or Leatherface.

I was driving down the road one day and then had a thought what if as punishment the entity would use something along the range of the blighted skin on the huntress

with V6 of RWBY, you have LOOOTS more to work with in terms of how you wanna fuck with the Entity later

2 actual gods and two demi-gods, as it were

like you cant tell me any killer can stand up to Oz or Salem now. i wouldn't believe it.

the Entity itself, however...

either way, while slow, every chapter is great. i find myself more curious on were we are going with the end game. im sure the slower approach will help add as much Canon RWBY as possible.

Dang that was rough on both of them. Huntress has been my favorite killer for a while now any chance she might be redeemed?

I had originally assumed that the entity fed on only negative emotions. But then they mentioned that it was the entity that gives the survivors a chance to escape and such for the very reason of feeding on their positive emotions.

On that subject, I wonder if the entity enjoyed all the sorrow and regret it got from the Huntress...and damn do I feel for the Huntress right now. Makes me kinda want to see Ruby become determined to not only be free of the entity, but save the Huntress as well. I could see Ruby seeing some glimmer of hope that the Huntress is still a good person deep down. A hope that the entity is more than happy to feed off of. (This just came to my mind as I'm craving more between these two. You got me addicted to their interactions with eachother, lol.)

I see bugs like that in a lot of games of that nature. The character just loses their path and can't figure out where to go. Can be funny sometimes, especially in horror games when it makes them look odd.

Either way, I'd definitely like to see it. And I , myself, do enjoy some good outtakes and bloopers.

Isn't Ruby capable of reacting to bullets at close range? so shouldn't the hatches be very easy to dodge for her, I mean even in a scared state shouldn't her muscle memory be kicking in to compensate?
But whatever your story.

hahahaha heck yea kill more people nice chapter my notification dont work so yea

Poor huntress. The entity is very mean. But glad Ruby is ok. Also a friend and I were talking and we had an argument over who would be more qualified to be a killer for dbd. Slenderman or Springtrap(FNAF) who do you think is better suited for dbd