"I AM THE LAW!"

I have to agree with Bar0ne. The dialogue for the arbiter is pretty rough to read. I am not sure if it is because he is injured and has to take a breath between each couple of words or that is how you are deciding to write his dialogue but, it does not flow and distracts from the character.

If he is speaking like that because he is injured then I definitely recommend mentioning that somewhere as an observation by Leslie or the baddies.

Otherwise, cracking good read as always!

metal box
The cowards! The fools!

Update is much appreciated. Hopefully there will be another one.

wow

Just one. Thing. To . Keep in. Mind
Unnecessary full stops really break up the flow of a sentence, and can be especially jarring when used in dialogue.

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Holy shit! That ending was awesome! It gave me chills! I love seeing the Emperor's Justice being done, can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks so much for updating!

Ave Imperator Arbitrator

The road ahead is long and dark

Have faith in the Emperor and He shall see it through

Burn the heretics! Ave imperator! Only in death does duty end.

Yessssss! MORE CHAOS, MORE BLOOD, MORE DESTRUCCION, MORE WARHAMMER, MORE ALL!.

Great chapter

I know one way to kill them all without collateral damage in a single go; a thermobaric rocket.

Interesting chapter.

Your story in the time of the pandemic is truly refreshing.

An awesome update my friend :)

well I don't know if it is because it is rated T or because you paused posting it but other guys that did the similar thing (death korps of justice, the justice of a tech-priest...) have more follows ,a lot more, so you might as well kick it to M true fans of. warhammer will always read it, you just keep arbitrator as he is, and I know it is hard to keep some schedule, but you have to understand us as well, you start reading a good warhammer fanfic, you get happy for it because those are rare, you get really into it and then it stops, I might as well not read it, because that feeling you get when you are into a good story and you can't finish it fucking sucks. so yeah I understand it is hard for the author bit it is not easy for the reader as well. And plz watch not to get entangled in Chaos to much, "death korps of justice" got in the latest chapters to much into it and I really don't know how will he untangle himself from that and continue the story (unless he finishes it right after he is done with that encurson) I suggest you see what "The justice of a tech-priest" did a lot of shit with chaos in the beginning and that is it you go on in DC universe without it. now I know you have your own plans for the story this is just my suggestion to keep it easy for you. This chapter was awesome, keep it up!