reread again

Of all the stories that have spiked my attention in this fandom, yours is by far my favorite. The grammar and syntax is rough, but I hope to read more. What is going to happen next? I am dying to find out. Please do at least one more big chapter that wraps this story up. This stuff is great and hope to see an update soon. THXXX11138

Pretty sure you aren't going to take this back up. Could you at least post a timeline of where it was going?

Please tell me this story is not dead. It's great!. Can't wait to see what Rita will find.

Awesome story!

What a crazy story! I love it. With each chapter I grow more interested in the changes in the Loud family and what happened to Lincoln in the other dimension. Moreover, I really liked Lyla, and would like to see more of her. Great Job! :D

Wow this is a great story, you've done an amazing job conveying the emotions everyone is feeling, and the trauma Lincoln has endured. Can't wait to see what else you have in store!

You did excellent with this chapter. I do enjoy how you still focus on world building in the other dimension. Characters are very believable as well. Good work!

Oh damn, Lucy with her tension is understandable and I’m afraid of what Rita will learn.

I wonder what secrets that book holds well can't wait for the next chapter.

Chapter was well wrote. Despite being home, Lincoln really can't shake off the person he became in the years he was away. While everyone else is wondering just what type of horrors he experienced. Right now, I'd be worried about how he'll react when he finds out Rita read his journal. And on another note, how will the world react when Lincoln is declared both alive and found? After being gone for 5 years, several parties are going to want to know what happened. From child service, local news, to other researchers who had to have helped Lisa with her work on the machine. I can just see all hell breaking loose for that kind of chapter. Keep writing.

Oh S#it, Rita You Reaallllyyy Do Not Want To Read That Journal Right About Now, At Least Not By Your Lonesome, Or Whithout Some Company (Like Oh Say Lori, Luna, Lisa, Lucy Or Even Your Hubby) For The MASSIVE Emotional Support You Be Needing After You Peer Through Lincoln’S “LOOKING GLASS” And Definetely Not Whithout Cracking Open The Strongest Alcohol You Have In Your Home.

I do Wonder If Lincoln Will Inadvertently Catch The Attention Of Some Royal Woods More Shady Unsavory Type People Like Oh’Say Gang Members And Street Hustlers While Taking A Walk Around The Old Neighborhood.

If So I Pity The Poor A$$Hats/Morons That Try To Start Anything With Him, Because Compared To The Horrors And Madness That Linc Had To Go Through In The ‘Puppet’ Dimension These Jerk Will Learn The True Meaning Of DARK JUSTICE, Whether The Like It or Not...

Of course. Invading privacy...

excellent work and wonder how things will turn out?

This story is great.