I really liked the story. I hope you finish it but I don't think that is happening.
Side note: I was never fond of Jinta in the anime and I certainly don't like him here. It is natural to be wry of strangers. But responding with hostility isn't called for.

This is great! Hope you update again!:)

Espero que la continues en algún momento.

Update? Please!

! I LOVE IT !

Loved it, continue!
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Update?

My concern is only intensifying? Now that I know it was a deliberate choice to power her down, I feel Very Concerned for her portrayal in this. I understand you wanted to keep her from going around with instakills and trivializing the struggle of those in the Bleach world, but. The power down was a bit too much.

She’s not even OP by the standards of her original world, considering all the “women-are-not-the-heroes” constraints Kishimoto cast upon his female leads. It’s jarrig to have her be powered down when canon already did all it could to limit and diminish her capabilities, y’know? She’s supposed to be almost 30! A 4th war veteran! Tsunade’s successor! Team Seven member! How is she at a combat level comparable to Ichigo at the beginning of his story?

As for the ineptitude that may come with being displaced, faced with a strange and unknown foe, and attempting to fight with discretion and no casualties... that’s still not a sufficient explanation for how powered down she was...? Imo, it would have made much more sense for Sakura to have made a marked, & conscious decision to handicap herself. Then her punch not utterly obliterating the low-level hollow would have made sense. This is a character whose canon battle aptitude are defined solely by her chakra control and intelligence, after all.

And considering her stats/background/history in this story, the injuries she received only make sense if she received them on purpose (as a necessary sacrifice to maintaining cover, or as a tool for underestimation), or if she received them bc something about being in a new world was explicitly said to have messed with her speed/strength/combat skills/situational awareness.

Otherwise, it frankly comes across as ludicrous for her to be so badly battered/challenged by one of the first, elementary enemies Ichigo handily defeats in canon. Like, would it make sense for a transplanted Sasuke or Naruto or Kakashi to struggle that much...? How would Tsunade or even Shizune fare against that hollow? How would any Naruto cast member fare against a menos grande, an adjuchas, an arrancar, etc...? How is Sakura going to survive even a spar with a captain from soul society?

Asdfghjkl. I’m sorry to have gone on so long about this, but it’s very frustrating when people power Sakura or any other female character down to “fit the story”, conveniently making the love interest in a position to rescue and/or mentor them. I really wish you had worked with Sakura’s abilities/personality as make sense for the profile you ascribed (late 20s, established medicnin, etc), limited only by self imposed constraints due to caution and compassion for civilian life. Instead, of, y’know, nerfing her. :/

Hi! Sorry for lurking for an entire three chapters! Just wanted to drop in to say I’m enjoying this fic, and really love the premise. I particularly love that Sakura is an adult, and that Kisuke is the romantic interest. I also really appreciate how you keep typos and grammar mistakes to a minimum!

Though, I do have to admit that our perceptions of Sakura clash a bit...? I see her as more on the distrustful and suspicious side, especially compared to the ever openhearted Naruto — partially bc of her experiences as a bullied kid; partially bc of socialization in Konoha as a child soldier w a civilian background; partially bc of her experiences getting her trust betrayed as a teen; and partially bc of her experiences seeing others she cares for be betrayed/hurt by misplaced trust. I also see her as much less prone to stuttering or any other signs of timidity/insecurity/flexibility, especially at near 30 yrs of age & experienced/habituated with using a firm and stubborn hand to deal with her patients (and Team Seven). And I see her as a teensy bit more hot tempered too? At least to those she trusts to a certain degree. Imo, Sakura isn’t a bleeding heart or particularly compassionate, unless she’s being compared to her not-so-moral (mostly male) compatriots of Naruto canon.
And she’s definitely a certified bad*** in my head.

But that doesn’t mean I dislike your Sakura! In fact, I think what comes across as OOC for me fits in nicely with this plot, since I think any romance with Kisuke would take decades to consolidate if she were more traditionally shinobi-like or closed off. Kisuke would find her a lot more suspicious and prob mark her as a threat/enemy from the get go.

One thing about your Sakura and my vision of her that’s the same is our idea of how she’d feel about an entire world of New Things. Her reaction in the first chapter, and desire to learn as much as she could felt very Sakura to me. On that note, I wish she were using her freetime more effectively. I mean, I’m concerned about how much Kisuke and maybe even Aizen are seeing of her private moments through surveillance, but I still wish she’d risk being suspicious to go actively seek out info about this new world. A library trip would be awesome! And it’d be great if we could get some kind of assurance she isn’t going to turn into some sort of Damsel in Distress in this new world...? It’s a little concerning her first hollow was so hard on her when it was at an introductory level - how will she fare against other shinigami, and stronge rhollows down the road? I sincerely hope she isn’t going to have to be rescued by Kisuke and protected by Ichigo & his clique of minors.

Anywho. Thanks so much for writing and sharing this story with us! Looking forward to seeing what comes next!

At Sakura's current age in the fic she seems much weaker than her 4th shinobi war self. I mean, almost a decade later I reckon she should be leveling cities with a single punch. Also, since you're going with the bleach time line, Ichigo would also be much weaker than her at this point. You make her seem like an average Joe when she isn't. Saying she'll be a lot stronger later is like saying she didn't dedicate her entire youth to becoming stronger so that she could protect her loved ones.

Get your act together man! And please update soon. Your fic is very good regardless, and I am looking forward to your next chapter.

It is so good！I am very looking forward your story!

It is interesting!Lookingforward it

Interesting story so far. I like how you've portrayed the characters, though as others have said, you've definitely greatly underpowered Sakura. No, having her one shot a hollow isnt interesting. But if you wanted to avoid that, maybe you should have had her move through time somewhere in the 3 year timeskip when she was 15 years old. Or have had her appear in the Bleach timeline somewhere in the Arancar arc. I dunno. As it is, she feels weak. Saying she's a powerhouse who will showcase her powers later, yet not having her one shot a basic hollow because it's "uninteresting" are opposing points; you can't really have both.

Anyway, while i like the idea i think your pacing is way too slow. Making each chapter coincide with an episode or two of Bleach is going to, well, take forever to write and you arent going to get anywhere. Hell, it's been over sixty thousand words, and we're only what, ten episodes in? Not a recipe for success.

Anyway, i hope you do keep writing, but also hope you're willing to make some changes to how you're writing it. Thanks!

I actually fucking love this! Please update soon xoxo need moree

Cute! I like it, can’t wait for some things to catch fire, and Sakura to meet the local red headed baboon/snake owner