Ah, that was a nice read. Ends on a really sweet note too. I wish it had been a bit longer to be honest, but I do feel this works just fine as a short piece too. It was refreshing to see some closure on the haphazard relationship between the three girls, and the mystery of Nightfalls' lost chapter solved. Thanks for taking the time to write this, and I hope you feel like writing some more fics around these characters. You've built up this sweet continuity with your previous works, y'know?

Gracias por actualizar, espero seguir leyendo alguna otra historia tuya!, Ya sea de H&B o Barb y lotte!,
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The suspense continues!

This is a fun read! It has this spooky, tense atmosphere to it. I'm curious to know what's inside that weird house, but it can't be anything pleasant, can it?

This fic also works a treat as a followup to your other stories. You stoked these relations between the three girls and now you've got them all trapped in a dangerous place, forcing their strained feelings bubbling to the surface. It's the kind of drama that's awesome to read. Hopefully Barbara will make the right choice here before Hannah does something wicked. All-in-all your writing is very fluid and well matched to the characters personalities. This will be an intriguing read for sure.

I hope you update soon!

This is really great! You write this nervous tension between the girls so well, and now they're stuck in some weird dimension in a bid to track down some long-lost Nightfall goodness. Please update soon! I need to see where this goes. Hannah being jealous is so cute and awkward lol

Muchas gracias por compartir!

This is a great read so far. You got the makings of a tense mystery adventure wrapped up in the thorned flower dynamic of a love triangle. It makes a lot of sense that Hannah's cordial patience with Lotte would run thin without much provocation, especially with Barbs in the midst. You got a great angle to explore with those three, and I'm curious exactly what they'll find in the mansion...hopefully something spooky...!

a Lotte and Barbara story eh? Interesting, but I'm mostly reading this because of Hannah. I really like hanna and this is probably the first story I've read in this fandom that has her in a (kind of) major role. I'm new to this fandom so yeah. and it looks like she is playing the role of the third wheel here, and a bit of an antagonist. Haha poor Hannah, but I will still love her regardless of how bitchy she might be. I can get behind that, I'm just really enjoying the fact that she actually has a role in a plot-driven story that isn't just some background supporting character. This whole premise sounds like it could have interesting developments too, I like fluff but I'm not a big fan of stories that center their entire plot on just fluff. anyways, I just wanted to say that you're doing a good job of writing this story, keep doing what you're doing.

also, I think you did fine with making Hannah unreadable. well to me I'm guessing that Hannah has a thing for Barbara and is targeting her ire at Lotte who relates so well with Barbara due to their shared interest. if I guessed it right then you were correct, If my guess is wrong then my point was correct. If my guess was totally out there and was not even close to what you meant when you said "make her appear unreadable" then I'm crazy and you should just ignore what I just said.