Oh, what? IT'S OVER? WHAAAAT? I thought there'd be more!
And the hell? Kai and Jay...dead? Nope, nope. NOT TRUE! I won't believe it. Kai has magic; he'll save himself and Jay...or they just fall onto a small island below them. That too.
Oh, man. I cannot WAIT until the next book!
See you soon, mate! (I hope so - you can't keep me waiting!)
~ BP2

Booker: Oh my God, what has Cole done.

Dash: What would happen if they didn't met Ali?

Nicki: Does that mean Lloyd would feels lonely?

Zack: Where would Ali be.

Dash: Does that mean they never met us?

Roy: I have no idea what's going to happen now.

"I'm so excited for the next story. Well I hope you have a wonderful day and peace out."

I read chapter 11 before this one 0_0

oh well, at least it still made sense, mostly. I mean the part with Dash and Cole I didn't get till after I read this.

Man, Kai really is broken if he is just giving out all this information without so much as a struggle to stay quite.

Also, your welcome for whatever it was that I helped you with

what is up with Cole and why did you kill one of my favorite character Kai

Roy: Dash, get out of there.

Dash: No!

Booker: What the heck is going on?

Zack: Dash trapped herself in her room.

Dash: You all don't understand me!

Nicki: Dash, I'm going to break down this door if you don't get out of there right now.

Dash: I want to be alone!

Booker: Why is she in there?

Roy: She's been thinking too much on the whole dream world thing.

Zack: Please let us in.

Dash: I can't.

Booker: Are you kidding me?! It's just a damn door you have to open.

Nicki: Just let us in.

Dash: You don't understand, I'm so confused and I don't know if that was actually Cole or not. If that was him then what did I do wrong? I THOUGHT WE WERE LOVERS!

Roy: You're overreacting, Dash. It was probably Nadakhan.

Nicki: That's it. I'm going to break down the door.

"Well I hope you have a wonderful day and peace out."

well now, it seems that Nadakhan is in for a few extra guests. I wonder why he wanted Cole awake ( there wasn't any mention of anyone else being stuck in a sleep spell)

I hope those guys succeed, but given their luck so far something bad is going to happen.

I honestly think Kai is in the most dangerous situation at the moment. I mean he helped one prisoner get away, then he himself broke free and is now attempting to free the ninja that Nadakhan hates most.

Amazing Job as usual :D

Nicki: I wonder what Nadakhan is going to do?

Booker: Something bad. It's obvious.

Zack: I feel a little scared now.

"Well I hope you have a wonderful day and peace out."

I hope things go well.

Booker: They won't.

Have a wonderful day and peace out.

You should write it longer. Also update more! I want to see what happen

This is the same chapter...

Hmm... Nadakhan seems to have something else planned for Kai. Wonder what he will do to get his approval? There was that time he tried being nice to Jay, perhaps he is going to make Kai think he can take better care of Nya than Jay could? Or maybe he would try to make the red ninja part of his little family? Honestly there is no telling what that guy could do.

Oh man, I'm so excited to see how this goes!
You're doing great! Can't wait to read more!
~ BP2

This was a very good chapter. I have finally read all of your stories they are all very good, expectually this series. Ke up thod work.

Oh, what? Didn't expect Kai to have a robotic arm - big and welcomed shock there.
And Nya and Ali have escaped? Hell yeah! Now Ali can get back to the others and teleport them to Dinjago, where, finally, Nadakan can be terminated.
Man, I can't wait for the next chapter!
I'll be waiting!
~ BP2

Zack: Run Nya! Run!

"I hope they make it out alive. Well I hope you have a wonderful day and peace out."