Forgot to put this on a previous chapter, but hope you have him take Madam Malkin too. Not only would he get plenty of “outfits” for his girls, but Malkin is supposed to have some REALLY big tits, so much in fact that it’s a joke that she uses them for holding items instead of pockets

You realize Harry didn’t list Luna on his list of people for his private car?

Round and round they go, when will the shit stop piling up? Only the author knows

About fucking time

Heh, Alice got her first taste, but how long until she’s hooked?

Dumbles should have been trying to get Harry on his side rather than the manipulation since he could have helped them ascend to the thrown and be the heir

... why not just launch Bombarda at the king at the start of the game?

Hmm, looks like Emma might be joining Harry’s bed soon

I have several ideas for those questions, but I need to read the rest of the current story so I can see what I don’t need to address

I could have sworn Balrog said he could order them to call him something else if he wished

Wouldn’t them being marked as Harry’s slaves and thus being connected to him allow the Patils to see Lilly?

I think you meant madam Pomfrey not Hooch wanted Harry to stay in the hospital overnight

Heh, wonder how long the teachers can hold out before they’re giving into Harry.
Also, surprised Harry didn’t ask if they could hide the collars. I mean sure they can be on display in private but no sense having it public since that may cause some witches to try and enslave themselves to be with him

I also realized you skipped over Daphne Greengrass during the sorting

Hmm, wonder when/if Alice and Augusta will be affected too
Alice is already doting and loving

Wood was the Keeper for the record (I realize it’s irrelevant now, but good to know for the future)

Heh, the bond isn’t only affecting Lily

And so the trust is destroyed

Wonder if Lily and Harry thought to inform Thaddeus about the small pouch

Harry is letting the darker side out, and it’s all Dumbles’ fault

No offense, but I hope the story picks up in some of the pace. I mean I get laying the ground work, it’s just my own impatience

Seems like a good time for the Dursleys to have “accidents” just a little push from the top of the stairs could be a good start