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What a story ! I need more of this, please.

This was my favorite chapter so far. So much vulnerability from Bellatrix... even if it was because of the effect of the potion.
Oof. Nasty cliffhanger mate. I will wait though. However long.
Cheers friend!

I love this drugged up version of Bellatrix right now, not as angry, and very interesting.

Awesome Hermione self-introspection chapter. Sorry I was a BIT impatient, :(, about her personal growth. Its good to see her stand up for herself.

This was an awesome chapter! And it is good to see Hermione start standing up for herself.

Okay, so not only is Hermione still a crybaby (nothing wrong w/crying, unless you're doing what someone trying to hurt you wants, repetitively), AND she's super clumsy and/or has poor luck? I can only imagine how scary a mouse could be, if Scabbers existed. I would think a Ravenclaw would be smarter than a Gryffindor, but. . . Also, keep up her stuttering, it goes along with the theme you've created of her being weak and easy to manipulate. I mean, if your trying to create a D/s relationship, your story makes sense. Otherwise you are taking a very bright opinionated character and making her less. If that's your intent, good job.

I thought you said she'd be less of a crybaby. Sobbing in the midst of a duel, is even worse than her previous behavior.

Thank god she won't be a crybaby forever, lol. Other than that, great story.

Acabo de encontrar tu historia y me aventé los 30 capítulos en una madrugada, no te obligues a escribir solo por consentir a tus lectores, por experiencia te digo, he esperado hasta 5 años para que terminen una historia. Mientras tengas la confianza, inspiración y ganas de escribir aquí te esperamos fielmente. Muchas gracias por esta hermosa historia Bellamione (son pocas las que me enganchan como la tuya)

Wow.. I’m just speechless.. I’m so invested in this story and my hart just hurts from all the emotions that I felt reading these amazing chapters. I’m so excited and curious about the following chapters. You’re so good at writing the tension and emotions and thoughts and- wow.

Thank you, thank you, for this story. Even if you are planning on not coming back ( which I hope you do) it's been so amazing reading it. But I'm so invested in it right now that's its gonna hurt not knowing more. I hope you find some inspiration and come back. Wish you the best :)

This is one of the best stories I've ever read. Please do not give up on it. It's brilliant and we're going places. Take us to those places, I beg you. This story has kept me captivated from the beginning. It gives me so much life. Much love 3

Great chapter!

Merlin's beard! What was all that emotions about? How am I suppose to handle that huge dump of angst? How dare you take me on such a feel-trip? Like don't me!
No, but sersiously, that was pure inspired brilliant writing, leaving us wanting so much more. Thanks.

dunno if you already know this but someone created a page for this fic on tvtropes so congrats!